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Language guru: Obama speech too 'professorial' for his target audience
CNN ^ | June 16th, 2010

Posted on 06/16/2010 11:38:36 PM PDT by TaraP

President Obama's speech on the gulf oil disaster Tuesday night was written at a 10th-grade level, which, according to analysts, may have gone over the heads of many in his audience...

Tuesday night's speech from the Oval Office of the White House was written to a 9.8 grade level, said Paul J.J. Payack, president of Global Language Monitor. The Austin, Texas-based company analyzes and catalogues trends in word usage and word choice and their impact on culture.

Though the president used slightly less than four sentences per paragraph, his 19.8 words per sentence "added some difficulty for his target audience," Payack said.

He singled out this sentence from Obama as unfortunate: "That is why just after the rig sank, I assembled a team of our nation's best scientists and engineers to tackle this challenge -- a team led by Dr. Steven Chu, a Nobel Prize-winning physicist and our nation's secretary of energy."

(Excerpt) Read more at cnn.com ...


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To: PetroniusMaximus

Now it makes sense. I is a dum azz.


101 posted on 06/17/2010 4:08:13 AM PDT by linn37 ( "The problem with socialism is that you eventually run out of other peoples money.)
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To: TaraP
Language guru: Obama speech too 'professorial' for his target audience



Whatcha ya'll mean by dat?
Didn't he say, 'Free Beer'?

102 posted on 06/17/2010 4:18:00 AM PDT by Condor51 (SAT CONG!)
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To: TaraP

“Language guru: Obama speech too ‘professorial’ for his target audience”

Oh, give me a break! The only thing he’s professional at is prevarication.


103 posted on 06/17/2010 4:19:28 AM PDT by RoadTest (Religion is a substitute for the relationship God wants with you.)
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To: GlockThe Vote

He is dumber than a box of hammers.

LLS


104 posted on 06/17/2010 4:28:01 AM PDT by LibLieSlayer ( WOLVERINES!)
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To: UnbelievingScumOnTheOtherSide
He may have been the “Manchurian Candidate” but it is still the “Being There” presidency.

Interesting in that Chance was an idiot and everyone projected what the wanted to see on him -- there was really nothing there. During the 2008 campaign zer0 said that people were projecting their wishes on him. I can't find the exact quote, but someone (probably Glenn Beck) played the soundbite a lot.
105 posted on 06/17/2010 4:29:25 AM PDT by Peet (<- A.K.A. the Foundling)
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To: TaraP

This is not true but even if it were, the implications would be clear. The admin has highly paid speechwriters and managers whose only job is to access the audience and deliver the goods. I am a professor of 33 years duration who teaches at all levels (undergrad, graduate, medical professional degree and general public lectures). I have to access different audiences daily and adjust daily. The best “message” undelivered is just another way to say... FAIL, i.e., Robert Green-type “surehanded goaltending”.


106 posted on 06/17/2010 4:34:51 AM PDT by rod1
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To: TaraP

Check this site out - analysis grade level of text:
http://bluecentauri.com/tools/writer/sample.php

From the speech:
Already, this oil spill is the worst environmental disaster America has ever faced.

The sentence Grades out at a 6th grade level....lol


107 posted on 06/17/2010 4:35:16 AM PDT by libertarian27 (Ingsoc: Department of Life, Department of Liberty, Department of Happiness)
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To: raybbr

FYI
http://people.ischool.berkeley.edu/~nunberg/payack.html

Size Doesn’t Matter
Geoffrey Nunberg

“Fresh Air” commentary,
April 18, 2006

At any one moment there are hundreds of made-up statistics floating around in the media, and fully 37 percent of them have to do with language.......
And there’s no shortage of hucksters ready to satisfy that need. Take one Paul J. J. Payack, a California marketing executive who runs an outfit called the Global Language Monitor, and who has a gift for concocting appealing factoids about language trends


108 posted on 06/17/2010 4:50:49 AM PDT by BilLies
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To: raybbr
That's what bugging people about the speech. It's a whiny-ass attempt at blame shifting and misdirection.

"The buck stops over there"

109 posted on 06/17/2010 5:14:25 AM PDT by thecabal (Destroy Progressivism)
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To: maggief
his audience waiting for a BIG sale?

OR

His audience that was sold the bill of goods?

110 posted on 06/17/2010 5:16:46 AM PDT by hoosiermama (ONLY DEAD FISH GO WITH THE FLOW.......I am swimming with Sarahcudah! Sarah has read the tealeaves.)
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To: TaraP

Man, I be trying to kick ass but I caint fine mah own, you know I mean. (There, that will do it.)


111 posted on 06/17/2010 5:48:28 AM PDT by Malesherbes (Sauve qui peut)
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To: Rummyfan
If you ask me the only people who still believe this guy are at a second grade level at best!

Actually I checked that yesterday after the speech- I had to go to the kindergarten level to find believers."

Right you are, I was being too generous!

112 posted on 06/17/2010 6:22:32 AM PDT by Brandonmark (News Coverage)
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To: Liz

I actually had someone tell me yesterday that it was okay for the schools to teach from a liberal slant, that it “forces students to think for themselves”...then went on to say that “liberals were the well educated”. Sounds like he attended a public school and drank the kool-aid.


113 posted on 06/17/2010 6:22:58 AM PDT by TommyDale (Independent - I already left the GOP because they were too liberal)
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To: TommyDale

Yeah, the Progs are smart like a conman is smarter than his marks (/snix).


114 posted on 06/17/2010 6:32:23 AM PDT by Liz (If teens can procreate in a Volkswagen, why does a spotted owl need 2000 acres? JD Hayworth)
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To: dixiechick2000

Well, I’m designation an unnamed player to be determined later.

We’ll see... ;^)


115 posted on 06/17/2010 9:11:30 AM PDT by DoughtyOne (06/15/2010 Obama's Shame-Wow address...)
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To: knarf

You must live in my neck of the woods. I can almost see it too.


116 posted on 06/17/2010 9:11:57 AM PDT by DoughtyOne (06/15/2010 Obama's Shame-Wow address...)
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To: TaraP

Too much for the LITTLE PEOPLE .....


117 posted on 06/17/2010 9:28:02 AM PDT by traumer
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To: TaraP

So it was because of the style and not the substance (or lack thereof)? Typical leftist hogwash.


118 posted on 06/17/2010 9:31:11 AM PDT by Hoodat (.For the weapons of our warfare are mighty in God for pulling down strongholds.)
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To: TaraP
"Language guru: Obama speech too 'professorial' for his target audience"

OK this a Gold Medal perforance in the Olympics of Verbal Gymnastics! Even the Russian Judge gives this a perfect 10.

hahahah

119 posted on 06/17/2010 9:34:55 AM PDT by Mad Dawgg (If you're going to deny my 1st Amendment rights then I must proceed to the next one...)
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To: TaraP

Any BOZO can read a teleprompter ....


120 posted on 06/17/2010 9:35:52 AM PDT by traumer
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