Please see reply number 5. The term “on par with” wasn’t used.
“Please see reply number 5. The term “on par with” wasn’t used.”
All right, I see that you intended to compare their lack of experience.
I would recommend that you be more cautious about using the term “version of,” as it implies similarities and parities that you might not intend.
I might also note that I would prefer someone of good character who lacked experience over a very experienced scoundrel.