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To: aruanan

The problem with long sentences is most people don’t read the entire thing. I have the same problem, and I often abuse parenthesis, because it’s how I think. I was just trying to be helpful. :)


75 posted on 02/03/2010 7:52:55 AM PST by brytlea (Jesus loves me, this I know.)
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To: brytlea
The problem with long sentences is most people don’t read the entire thing. I have the same problem, and I often abuse parenthesis, because it’s how I think. I was just trying to be helpful. :)

Sure! Thanks. On this, though, my alternative was either to make a much longer paragraph with shorter repetitive sentences or use bullet points or a numerical list. I didn't think of using the list until later.
76 posted on 02/04/2010 9:39:23 AM PST by aruanan
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