Yes,that's good.But they'd have to be backed up by newspaper headlines and stats.I remember being in Florida a few years ago and seeing a Toronto newspaper there (which isn't unusual...lots of Canadians spend the winter in FL).The headline read something like "2,000 Ontario Cancer Patients Sent To US For Treatment".The story went on to say that if these patients were required to remain within the Canadian health system they would have had to have waited months (can't remember how many months) for their treatment to begin once a diagnosis was made.
No, it should be simple and stright-forward.
There are plenty of stories already out there that tell about the shortages/problems with health care in Britan and Canada. They aren’t sinking in.
I has to be personal. A one on one invertiew will make people think “that could be me.”