I assume you mean like this one?
You left out an important part of KayEyeDoubleDee's comment:
"concentrating instead on promoting the work of people [like Kristinn] who are doing original investigative reporting and who are presenting their results in simple, straightforward, declarative arguments."
It had no effect on my observation, so I left it out.
If John and Jim made the changes suggested, I’d be outta here.