Yeah, I know that store. It changes hands every year or so, but it’s basically the same store over and over again.
BTW, since we seem to be the only ones here at the moment, it was hard to do, but I let 5 people read my story today. I got great feedback from everybody! All the changes have been minor (mostly correcting my plentiful typos) and it’s all done except the title!
That’s great news! :)
I would offer to help with the title, but I suck at titles :)