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1 posted on 08/17/2006 8:36:46 PM PDT by Number57
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Since you already have it plotted, write the last chapter first. With that goal in mind it'll be easy to create chapter headings from the first chapter onward. Kick out that first draft as fast as it flows, remembering that writers don't really write -- they rewrite.

Oh yes, Rule #1. Don't let ANYONE critique your stuff until you've finished it to your own satisfaction. No one's opinion really matters except yours...and the editor's, of course.

30 posted on 08/17/2006 8:49:04 PM PDT by Bernard Marx (Fools and fanatics are always certain of themselves, but the wise are full of doubts.)
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It's very simple. Write the first sentence:

"Call me Ishmael."

Then, if you get stuck for further ideas, just skip to the end and write the last sentence:

"It was the devious-cruising Rachel, that in her retracing search after her missing children, only found another orphan."

Now all you have to do is fill in the middle!


32 posted on 08/17/2006 8:50:14 PM PDT by SirJohnBarleycorn
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The cure for writer's block is to write.

Sit down and write. Don't write perfect prose, don't write Steinbeck (its been done); just write.

Get a rhythm going. Do it every day. Repeat as needed. (Write, don't edit.)

For some insight, read Steinbeck's Journal of a Novel.

In the meantime, write!


[Writers write; editors edit.]

33 posted on 08/17/2006 8:50:45 PM PDT by Coyoteman (I love the sound of beta decay in the morning!)
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To: Number57

What is it that catches you (stops you)? Is it where to take the plot?

Do you believe you have a thorough understanding of the character, nature, and thought processes of your characters? Are your people well developed enough to solve the problem/s before them?

Can you take the main characters, set them on a "stage" with their problem, and "see" them interacting with each other the way real people would, to solve their problem/s?

If not, then I suggest going back and fleshing out the characters more fully, assigning them more depth of thought, action, and interaction, giving them more and varying qualities of personhood, so that you can see what they would do in a given situation.

Then beef up your plot to create a situation or beef up the situation you have already put them in, a situation where they HAVE to solve a problem to "survive," set them on that stage, and watch what they do. Then just write it down (and edit, etc.).


34 posted on 08/17/2006 8:50:56 PM PDT by GretchenM (What does it profit a man to gain the whole world and lose his soul? Please meet my friend, Jesus.)
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To: Number57

Start the chapter: It was a dark and stormy night...


35 posted on 08/17/2006 8:51:40 PM PDT by REDWOOD99
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Write. Write, write, write. Start a blog, do something. I wouldn't worry about the creative writing sites too much at this time. I've seen some good criticism and some bad criticism on these sites. There are some, though, that show up to trash stuff, and you sound like you're having confidence problems right now. Write stuff you like for yourself and people who share your tastes.

Quit rewriting the same chapters over and over. Push forward, if the next chapter isn't what you want, write a bridge chapter to get past the part that's giving you a problem.

This will also sound kind of strange, but don't fall too much in love with one piece of work, or keep reworking the same things over and over. I don't know if you're into sports, but I've thought about this story a lot. Roger Staubach won two Super Bowls with the Cowboys, and played in two others. On a Thanksgiving day game, he was knocked out, and his backup, Clint Longley came in. Longley threw two touchdowns in the fourth quarter to win a game against the Redskins. He never had another significant NFL moment. Staubach commented in his autobiography that after that game, Longley would sit around looking at the game film over and over. Staubach said he quit working, and was happy just to relive that one moment of glory, over and over.

Keep pushing yourself, and your work will continually improve, but only if you keep working. When you are successful, move on. When you fail, move on. But keep writing.

36 posted on 08/17/2006 8:52:49 PM PDT by Richard Kimball (The most important thing is sincerity. Once you can fake that, everything else is easy.)
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I've hit a wall. A large brick wall. I've since stopped editing my own stuff, but try as I might, I can't write another chapter that I'm okay with. How do you, in your experience, get past it? I'll appreciate any help anyone can offer.

In my experience, writing with right-handed pencils significantly increases one's odds of developing severe writer's block.

Forgive me, Petronski! Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery!

40 posted on 08/17/2006 8:53:01 PM PDT by jdm (I gotta give the Helen Thomas obsession a rest.)
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...I'm no writer...

Did you answer your own question?

Why is this in News/Activism and not back in General/Chat?

41 posted on 08/17/2006 8:53:10 PM PDT by delacoert
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Change the date in your mind to 2009.

Now you are three years ahead of the point where you start thinking about it.

You still have time to forget the whole idea and move on with your life.
44 posted on 08/17/2006 8:54:00 PM PDT by msnimje (What part of-- "DEATH TO AMERICA" --do the Democrats not understand?)
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Have you included an earth-shattering kaboom? There's always an earth-shattering kaboom!


45 posted on 08/17/2006 8:54:11 PM PDT by FreedomCalls (It's the "Statue of Liberty," not the "Statue of Security.")
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Write the ending and then backtrack.


51 posted on 08/17/2006 8:55:46 PM PDT by P-Marlowe (((172 * 3.141592653589793238462) / 180) * 10 = 30.0196631)
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53 posted on 08/17/2006 8:56:15 PM PDT by WestVirginiaRebel (Common sense will do to liberalism what the atomic bomb did to Nagasaki-Rush Limbaugh)
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To: Number57; writer33; Jeff Head

Lets ping 2 of them


56 posted on 08/17/2006 8:56:50 PM PDT by GeronL (flogerloon.blogspot.com -------------> Rise of the Hate Party)
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To: Number57

juat plow through never once looking back. Writing is rewriting... It is never what it starts out to be, but before you can get it there, you need to get it out... every last bit of it... then and only then go back and make changes...

just my two cents...


65 posted on 08/17/2006 9:01:13 PM PDT by ARA
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"I constantly re-read and edit, and re-read and edit more. "


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You just found your problem.

Since you have the book "worked out in your mind" -- I would suggest to start writing, ANYTHING, that is even vaguely related, then keep writing, don't look back, don't correct typos, don't correct grammar, style, inconisitency, anything, just focus and keep writing each chapter to "THE END".

THEN you can go back and edit and rewrite.



Create a really lousy first draft -- then you can improve it and perfect it. But if don't write anything down, until you think it's perfect, you'll never get done.

Just do it right now -- write a page, anything.

Then tomorrow, keep it going. Without even noticing, once you stop worrying about making it perfect, the words will flow and you'll do better than you thought.

It's always easier to re-write, so just get the first draft down, the quality of the first draft is no indication of the qualify of the final product.

Get started -- NOW and good luck!


72 posted on 08/17/2006 9:05:26 PM PDT by FairOpinion (Dem Foreign Policy: SURRENDER to our enemies. Real conservatives don't help Dems get elected.)
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nuconvert - your very first response NAILED IT!

right now you are being to critical of yourself- and not "feeeling" it....

it will come....at the risk of sending some minds into the gutter- I get my best ideas in the shower.....LOL

take lots of showers....

sing in there- etc...

you will get it!

don't let anyone else finish this for you

"you can duit"


74 posted on 08/17/2006 9:06:05 PM PDT by eeevil conservative (JOHN BOLTON FOR PRESIDENT)
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Nothing like a good moose hunting trip to clear your mind. Or at least, help me gut one. That'll cure your sinuses AND your writer's block. ;)


86 posted on 08/17/2006 9:12:37 PM PDT by Chena ("I'm not young enough to know everything." (Oscar Wilde))
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oh yeah- one other tip..

when I write- I turn the monitor OFF...

thos wzy i can jist erote from the gtu witout worrying about spelling and tupos....

it shows too.....

ok now let me tun my monitor back on...


87 posted on 08/17/2006 9:12:56 PM PDT by eeevil conservative (JOHN BOLTON FOR PRESIDENT)
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smoke some weed it helps unlock your brain then listen to pink floyd and tori amos records for the rest of the night. Do that for about a month and you might rember what yuo were planning on doing before you you smoked all that weed and you might actually write the words down on paper instead of just thinknig you did. It works for me anyhow. well i ve never got to the point where i write anything donw on paper but still its pretty awesome :-)


95 posted on 08/17/2006 9:15:58 PM PDT by freepatriot32 (Holding you head high & voting Libertarian is better then holding your nose and voting republican)
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Some I have known put it away 24 hours to several weeks or so.

Some write XXX words/day regardless until it begins to flow again--and whether or not they write on the blocked task.

Those who do the latter seem to be the most productive overall, IIRC.


100 posted on 08/17/2006 9:18:55 PM PDT by Quix (LET GOD ARISE AND HIS ENEMIES BE SCATTERED. LET ISRAEL CALL ON GOD AS THEIRS! & ISLAM FLUSH ITSELF)
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