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I died because I'm poor. (Compassionate mod kicks in a penny for the funeral)
Poet | I.C. Howe

Posted on 06/26/2006 5:44:09 AM PDT by phoenixrising47

I died because I'm poor.

I'm floating in the water. My Mom is accross from me. Mosquitos swarm around us. They're our only friends.

I'm in the United States. Of, America. Not Vietnam. I'm not on T.V. It's really me. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.

Mama's eyes are fluttering. Like a butterfly. This is real. Please, people. Not a photo op. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.

I spit on Mama's lips, to give her moisture. Her face turns cold. I'm crying 'cause I'm poor.

Oh, Mama! Dear sweet Mama. I wail into the sky. Where's that promising Bush? Mama didn't have to die.

Now it's my turn. I hear the helicopter, but have no strenth to go out on the porch. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.

I hear the rotors of the blades. I'm hugging Mama. Get her warm. Oh, Mama, it's come to this. We're dying 'cause we're poor.

I reach out to the men. And suddenly it's black. My life's film has broke. It broke 'cause I'm poor.

It broke 'cause I'm poor. It didn't have to be. We did better in the Tsunami. We did better in the war.

We died 'cause we're poor

by I.C. Howe


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To: gridlock
"They will pray for our deaths.They do not care about you or your children.
Well, DUH! What was your first clue!"

You and I may not trust our politicians ,but plenty of other people do trust them. People who do not identify with those people in NO because they are poor and black need to realize we all look stupid and poor to our politicians.
221 posted on 06/26/2006 7:13:15 AM PDT by after dark (I love hateful people. They help me unload karmic debt.)
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To: phoenixrising47


This poem sucks.

He failed to mention the impact of global warming causing the swell of the body of water he's lying in.

There is also no mention of his deeply held fears of homosexual husband leaving him.

Also note the lack of soul searching about his black skin.

There is no call to vote for Hillary, no underlying messages about the peaceful nature of Islam and no Dixie Chicks music playing in the background.

Yep - this poem truly sucks.

(/sarcasm)


222 posted on 06/26/2006 7:17:39 AM PDT by Tzimisce (How Would Mohammed Vote? Hillary for President! www.dndorks.com)
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To: Xenalyte

This thread is hilarious.

The thread is funny because of the FREEPERS but not the person who started it. I should have been more clear.


223 posted on 06/26/2006 7:19:05 AM PDT by napscoordinator
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To: Tzimisce

"You want some 'poems', I got some f'in 'poems.'"

224 posted on 06/26/2006 7:19:12 AM PDT by dfwgator (Florida Gators - 2006 NCAA Men's Basketball Champions)
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To: Zechariah_8_13

And check out the keywords while you're at it!


225 posted on 06/26/2006 7:20:28 AM PDT by VoiceOfBruck (optional, printed after your name on post)
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To: SlowBoat407

Roflmao!


226 posted on 06/26/2006 7:24:52 AM PDT by EnquiringMind
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To: phoenixrising47

Im alive becuse Im rich (and you're not ha ha)


227 posted on 06/26/2006 7:28:39 AM PDT by woofie
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To: phoenixrising47

IBTZ


228 posted on 06/26/2006 7:29:37 AM PDT by TC Rider (The United States Constitution © 1791. All Rights Reserved.)
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To: PBRSTREETGANG

LOL


229 posted on 06/26/2006 7:31:43 AM PDT by ladyjane
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To: phoenixrising47
I died because I'm poor. The rich people up on the hill, however, have been alive for the last 900 years.
230 posted on 06/26/2006 7:32:18 AM PDT by starbase (Understanding Written Propaganda (click "starbase" to learn 22 manipulating tricks!!))
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To: dfwgator

Dice is the greatest. Who remembers Clay as "Max Goldman" in "Crime Story", circa 1986-1990? He was GREAT in that role, too.


231 posted on 06/26/2006 7:37:03 AM PDT by RayStacy
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To: phoenixrising47

I.C. Howe, are you acquainted with Heywood Jablome?


232 posted on 06/26/2006 7:38:58 AM PDT by stbdside
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To: phoenixrising47

"My Mom is accross from me." "I.C. Howe"


233 posted on 06/26/2006 7:39:31 AM PDT by moehoward
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To: stbdside

Maybe he knows former Nebraska running back I.M. Hipp.


234 posted on 06/26/2006 7:39:38 AM PDT by dfwgator (Florida Gators - 2006 NCAA Men's Basketball Champions)
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To: phoenixrising47

Huh?


235 posted on 06/26/2006 7:41:30 AM PDT by gogeo (The /sarc tag is a form of training wheels for those unable to discern intellectual subtlety.)
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To: phoenixrising47

I.C. H.......get a job.


236 posted on 06/26/2006 7:43:27 AM PDT by auto power
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To: phoenixrising47

I died because I ignored the hurricane warning.

Now I'm floating downstream, pissed off and looking for somebody to blame...

Anybody, but me. I was a part of the system, you see...A vicious cycle where I would choose not to get a job and pursue education, but why bother when that free money from the gubmint come every week.

It's the United States...But it doesn't feel like it anymore. Nobody will expect me to have any personal accountability, and will blame my death not on my own ignorance where it belongs, but on that promising Bush.

Oh mama, dear sweet mama, thank you for raising me to be a democrat, so I no longer have to bear the burden of thinking for myself. It gave me the the basis in fantasy to believe my situation is everyone's fault but my own.

I hear the rotor blades, every minute they beat the air they cost the gubmint $280.00...But that's my entitlement, because I refused to leave my house when the hurricane come.

I try to go out on the porch to check the mailbox for another welfare check, but it's underwater I'm poor because I'm dumb.

We died because we're poor and dumb.

U. C. Howe Nowe


237 posted on 06/26/2006 7:44:16 AM PDT by Heavyrunner (Socialize this.)
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To: phoenixrising47
I died because I'm poor.
... I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.

Just a little inconsistency, zotbait...

238 posted on 06/26/2006 7:44:18 AM PDT by sionnsar (†trad-anglican.faithweb.com† | Iran Azadi | SONY: 5yst3m 0wn3d - it's N0t Y0urs)
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To: Xenalyte; PJ-Comix; franksolich; Charles Henrickson; phoenixrising47

I bitch because I'm rich.

I'm don't have enough stuff. My car isn't showy enough. Sometimes the women ignore me. Luckily I'm getting a new one soon.

I'm in the United States. I have this really cool 80" highdef plasma TV. I leave in on all night, just cuz I can. I'm bitch because I'm rich.

Mama's in a nursing home. It's kinda expensive, but they treat her so nice. She goes on cultural trips at least once a week. I bitch becase I'm rich.

Sometimes, when I look at my portfolio of assets, I get upset because I could have made a lot more money by making better decisions. I'm crying 'cause I'm not richer.

Oh, damn! I wish I had a bigger house! It's nice, but it's not enough! I didn't have to live like this! That darned Bush!

I'm gloating at everyone. I have so much, and they are so poor. Get a job, you lazy slugs!

Now it's my turn. I want to take a trip to China in a week. I'd like to stay for six months, but I can only afford two. I bitch because I'm rich.

I wish other people would do what I want. I like to control their tiny little lives by buying them. I just feel I don't control enough.

I bitch because I'm rich.

by Yusuk Ass


239 posted on 06/26/2006 7:50:47 AM PDT by Lazamataz (I hate asshat Islamics with Scuds in their Volkswagen Minivans.)
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To: Lazamataz
I'm gloating at everyone. I have so much, and they are so poor.

I didn't know that Clinton was into writing poetry, now.
240 posted on 06/26/2006 7:54:39 AM PDT by true_blue_texican
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