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I died because I'm poor. (Compassionate mod kicks in a penny for the funeral)
Poet
| I.C. Howe
Posted on 06/26/2006 5:44:09 AM PDT by phoenixrising47
I died because I'm poor.
I'm floating in the water. My Mom is accross from me. Mosquitos swarm around us. They're our only friends.
I'm in the United States. Of, America. Not Vietnam. I'm not on T.V. It's really me. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.
Mama's eyes are fluttering. Like a butterfly. This is real. Please, people. Not a photo op. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.
I spit on Mama's lips, to give her moisture. Her face turns cold. I'm crying 'cause I'm poor.
Oh, Mama! Dear sweet Mama. I wail into the sky. Where's that promising Bush? Mama didn't have to die.
Now it's my turn. I hear the helicopter, but have no strenth to go out on the porch. I'm dying 'cause I'm poor.
I hear the rotors of the blades. I'm hugging Mama. Get her warm. Oh, Mama, it's come to this. We're dying 'cause we're poor.
I reach out to the men. And suddenly it's black. My life's film has broke. It broke 'cause I'm poor.
It broke 'cause I'm poor. It didn't have to be. We did better in the Tsunami. We did better in the war.
We died 'cause we're poor
by I.C. Howe
TOPICS: Culture/Society; US: Louisiana; US: Mississippi
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To: Xenalyte
I LOVE "Kill My Landlord."
Haven't heard that one in a while.
"C-I-L-L my laaaand-looord."
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posted on
06/26/2006 6:29:43 AM PDT
by
Allegra
(I'm Shizophrenic. No, I'm Not. Yes, I Am. No, I'm NOT. Are TOO. Am NOT.)
To: Xenalyte
Oh my, your tag......SO stealing that! LOL
182
posted on
06/26/2006 6:29:46 AM PDT
by
kimmie7
(If they say you kick like a girl, take it as a COMPLIMENT!)
To: phoenixrising47
Lord have mercy, I HATE this crap!!!!
183
posted on
06/26/2006 6:29:56 AM PDT
by
DustyMoment
(FloriDUH - proud inventors of pregnant/hanging chads and judicide!!)
To: phoenixrising47
IC shitty poetry and hyperbole.
To: Xenalyte
185
posted on
06/26/2006 6:31:27 AM PDT
by
ShandaLear
(Gringos Unite!!!)
To: phoenixrising47
The "poor" in the USA frequently have TVs, cars and / or weight problems.
186
posted on
06/26/2006 6:31:28 AM PDT
by
Little Ray
(If you want to be a martyr, we want to martyr you.)
To: phoenixrising47
You died because you stayed after you were advised to leave.
You stayed because you thought you could loot some new stuff
Nice try.
187
posted on
06/26/2006 6:32:21 AM PDT
by
Paisan
To: phoenixrising47
Where's that promising Bush? Mama didn't have to die.It's Bush's fault.TM
188
posted on
06/26/2006 6:32:56 AM PDT
by
Tolerance Sucks Rocks
(One flag--American. One language--English. One allegiance--to America!)
To: phoenixrising47
189
posted on
06/26/2006 6:33:12 AM PDT
by
scott0347
(Commander of the 0347th Lancer Brigade, Operator of the Immaculate Steamroller)
To: IronJack
Have you heard Shirly Q. Liquor's version of "Who IS my chilruns' daddy?" There's a beautiful dedication to her 15th child, Assinine, whereby she asks the age old question: 'And WHY is he lookin so blank?'
To: phoenixrising47
The best you can hope for is that the next devastating flood is on Election day in Chocolate Town. Then you can be sure that Nagin will have all dem buses running. All you gotta do for that carton of Kools is vote for the peoples with the big "D" next to their name.
191
posted on
06/26/2006 6:36:40 AM PDT
by
WideGlide
(That light at the end of the tunnel might be a muzzle flash.)
To: Verbosus
>"I died because I'm poor."
Well, maily because you aren't too bright."
Katrina should have been a wake up call...If a nuclear strike ,a big earth quake or heaven help us, we are hit with an asteroid ,our leaders(republican and democrat) will use all the resources of our government to save themselves and their loved ones.They will pray for our deaths.They do not care about you or your children.
192
posted on
06/26/2006 6:37:41 AM PDT
by
after dark
(I love hateful people. They help me unload karmic debt.)
To: Verbosus
>"I died because I'm poor."
Well, maily because you aren't too bright."
Katrina should have been a wake up call...If a nuclear strike ,a big earth quake or heaven help us, we are hit with an asteroid ,our leaders(republican and democrat) will use all the resources of our government to save themselves and their loved ones.They will pray for our deaths.They do not care about you or your children.
193
posted on
06/26/2006 6:37:41 AM PDT
by
after dark
(I love hateful people. They help me unload karmic debt.)
To: phoenixrising47
If you wish to go through life whining and feeling sorry for yourself then by all means do it but don't blame others.
194
posted on
06/26/2006 6:39:24 AM PDT
by
Paige
("Guard against the impostures of pretended patriotism." --George Washington)
To: phoenixrising47
Oh cry me a river...this is one of the dumbest threads ever!
To: phoenixrising47
To: phoenixrising47
No ZOT needed here. This is quintessential statist drivel.
No need to examine WHY I'm poor, or even why the socialist programs of the DIMs failed to change that.
I'm dead because I failed to realize that I'm a creature of volitional consciousness and act on that premise!
197
posted on
06/26/2006 6:43:24 AM PDT
by
Panzerlied
("We shall never surrender!")
To: napscoordinator
I beg to differ! This thread is hilarious.
198
posted on
06/26/2006 6:43:31 AM PDT
by
Xenalyte
(The wages of sin are death, but after taxes are taken out it's just sort of a tired feeling.)
To: phoenixrising47; Xenalyte; humblegunner; Bacon Man; Hap
Under the bridge there lies a troll;
Yellow slime; oozing down;
The sky is squiggling and the air is metallic;
Butterflies float around my eyebrows;
Limp wrists and clovers died because I suck
And the gray grass congeals before my countenance;
So I'm just writing any stupid word that comes to mind
Pinwheel, snake, Ouzo, apocolypse, tattoo
I died because my poetry is so poor
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posted on
06/26/2006 6:44:28 AM PDT
by
Allegra
(I'm Shizophrenic. No, I'm Not. Yes, I Am. No, I'm NOT. Are TOO. Am NOT.)
To: phoenixrising47
"That was excruciatingly bad."
200
posted on
06/26/2006 6:45:55 AM PDT
by
dfwgator
(Florida Gators - 2006 NCAA Men's Basketball Champions)
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