Don't let presidio annoy you. You were right to point out the paragraph omission, and IMO "Paragraphs are our friend" is a nice way to do it.
When the two of you put together have been here half as long as I have (under this screen name) you'll probably get sick of hearing "paragraphs are our friends." Meanwhile, I saw that the article was incorrectly formatted, and posted it as the first response. A little lesson in FR ettiquette: The first rule of FR is "READ THE THREAD BEFORE RESPONDING DOPEY!"
This is one of the few posts that was actually more effective without paragraphs ... it captured the momentum of the show, how wired many of us feel after the hour is up, and was very "stream of consciousness" in a humorous way. Not Strunk and White-ish.
As a '24/Jack Bauer fan, I thoroughly enjoyed it.