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To: AmericaUnited
<<< "Yawn...Big deal. I know people who are absolutely brilliant thinkers and yet can't write. I know a few fantastic writers who are dumber than rocks." >>>>

Preferring to make my views known to the White House and to my senators by personal mail, I have generally avoided commenting on this forum about Ms. Miers' qualifications. Your remark, however, pushed me to the edge. How?

Over a twenty-year span in my profession of teaching both English composition and literature, I've taught thousands of students. To date, not ONE bright student failed to write coherently, even brilliantly, but, without exception, all of the poor thinkers invariably produced equally poor writing.

Simply put, as the mind works, so do the words tumbling out on paper (or on a word processor). Ms. Miers' mushy, unintelligible writing not only reveals a mushy, mediocre mind but also portends an embarrassing process. A "nice" woman does not an exceptionally qualified Supreme Court justice make. I, for one, hope she steps aside.

Regards . . . Penny


23 posted on 10/15/2005 3:32:59 AM PDT by Penny
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To: Penny
You're not alone.
24 posted on 10/15/2005 3:35:56 AM PDT by Do not dub me shapka broham ("We don't want a Supreme Court justice just like George W. Bush. We can do better.")
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To: Penny
Over a twenty-year span in my profession of teaching both English composition and literature, I've taught thousands of students. To date, not ONE bright student failed to write coherently, even brilliantly, but, without exception, all of the poor thinkers invariably produced equally poor writing.

B.I.N.G.O.

26 posted on 10/15/2005 3:38:23 AM PDT by KentTrappedInLiberalSeattle ("It'sTime for Republicans to Start Toeing the Conservative Line, NOT the Other Way Around!")
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To: Penny
To date, not ONE bright student failed to write coherently, even brilliantly, but, without exception, all of the poor thinkers invariably produced equally poor writing.

Simply put, as the mind works, so do the words tumbling out on paper (or on a word processor). Ms. Miers' mushy, unintelligible writing not only reveals a mushy, mediocre mind but also portends an embarrassing process.

Sounds just like something I stumbled upon during the 70s in something Laharpe wrote.  Can't say I disagree with him or you--too much.  I wouldn't want to.

I do believe your judgment based on this narrow sample is overly harsh.

Not one brilliant hack in twenty years?  Remarkable.  Congratulations.

34 posted on 10/15/2005 3:57:51 AM PDT by Racehorse (Where your treasure is, there will your heart be also.)
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To: Penny

I have to strongly disagree with you here. There are many people who can think in very complex and sophisticated ways, but have a hard time translating those ideas and thoughts onto paper, in a way that an English teacher like yourself would be happy with. This is a much wider phenomena than you claim.


36 posted on 10/15/2005 4:06:17 AM PDT by AmericaUnited
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To: Penny
I hope everyone reads your post #23. It matches my life experience.

I know (hope?) all of us would use our best prose if we were writing to our governor.

It is a good thing I don't write to our RINO governor (who wanted to increase the sales tax on one of my favorite products from 20% to 90%) because if I did every third word would make her blush. :-)
164 posted on 10/15/2005 7:33:17 AM PDT by cgbg (Need Katrina funding? Sell the airwaves.)
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To: Penny
Over a twenty-year span in my profession of teaching both English composition and literature, I've taught thousands of students. To date, not ONE bright student failed to write coherently, even brilliantly, but, without exception, all of the poor thinkers invariably produced equally poor writing.

A lot of commas in that sentence. I recommend you rework it:

To date, not ONE bright student failed to write coherently, even brilliantly. Without exception, all of the poor thinkers invariably produced equally poor writing.

Are you sure you are an English teacher?

220 posted on 10/15/2005 8:26:35 AM PDT by freedumb2003 (Lord, help me with me, I ask so little of you...really..)
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To: Penny
Over a twenty-year span in my profession of teaching both English composition and literature, I've taught thousands of students. To date, not ONE bright student failed to write coherently, even brilliantly, but, without exception, all of the poor thinkers invariably produced equally poor writing.

Simply put, as the mind works, so do the words tumbling out on paper (or on a word processor). Ms. Miers' mushy, unintelligible writing not only reveals a mushy, mediocre mind but also portends an embarrassing process. A "nice" woman does not an exceptionally qualified Supreme Court justice make. I, for one, hope she steps aside.

Regards . . . Penny


C-

You've used too many commas, mixed formal and informal verbiage and topped it off with unnecessary capitalization.

Learn the basics before throwing stones in a glass house.

283 posted on 10/15/2005 9:50:05 AM PDT by pyx (Rule #1. The LEFT lies. Rule #2. See Rule #1.)
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