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To: pcottraux

I would suggest that you print smaller, and pay attention to both vertical and horizontal spacing. Your dialogue takes up as much space as the action. To me, that's a little distracting. Carry on!


27 posted on 09/09/2005 1:34:10 PM PDT by spiffy
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To: spiffy

I have big, sloppy handwriting, but I'll try my best.


30 posted on 09/09/2005 1:35:33 PM PDT by pcottraux
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