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To: Congressman Billybob
Great article, as usual, John. But...

Its lede says: "The U.S. Army Corps of Engineers said Thursday that a lack of funding for hurricane-protection projects around New Orleans did not contribute to the disastrous flooding that followed Hurricane Katrina."

A competent reporter would have discovered that fact. And honest reporter would have put that fact in or near the lede.

lede ???

And ???

I professionally edit and/or proofread for a small fee :)

11 posted on 09/01/2005 9:35:09 PM PDT by upchuck ("If our nation be destroyed, it would be from the judiciary." ~ Thomas Jefferson)
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To: upchuck

lede-The first paragraph of a newspaper story. It should contain the most important information.


19 posted on 09/01/2005 10:03:33 PM PDT by elli1
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To: upchuck
Come on,stop being a ninny! ;)
20 posted on 09/01/2005 10:10:04 PM PDT by smoothsailing (Qui Nhon Turtle Co.)
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To: upchuck
The "and" is a mistake. It should have been "An." However, the word "lede" is now accepted usage for the first paragraph of any story. The former word "lead" could be misread as the heavy dull metal. Hence the new usage (which I only decided to use after checking with a couple grammarians last week).

John / Billybob
26 posted on 09/01/2005 10:51:24 PM PDT by Congressman Billybob (My tagline is on vacation, lying in the hammock with a cold beer.)
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