To: Cicero
I agree on how poorly this was written. It mentions he was fired after 22 years for trying to arrest a superior officer. What was the story behind that? Is it relevant? If not why include it?
Also, why did the dog die? Did the dog overheat in the car because she was in there for two hours? What is the story? If everyone was standing around, why?
This article would be turned down by most high school papers.
78 posted on
08/23/2005 2:58:24 PM PDT by
IrishCatholic
(No local communist or socialist party chapter? Join the Democrats, it's the same thing.)
To: IrishCatholic
The dog died after being run over in traffic. How it got out of the car is unclear.
79 posted on
08/23/2005 3:07:46 PM PDT by
CedarDave
(On my way to Crawford from NM for 08/27 rally. Five years a FReeper - 08/17/00)
To: IrishCatholic
Also, why did the dog die? Did the dog overheat in the car because she was in there for two hours? What is the story? Step back, take a deep breath and then read it again.
It said the dog was hit by a car. You would be turned
down to proofread this article by most high school
papers.
95 posted on
08/23/2005 4:31:11 PM PDT by
higgmeister
(In the shadow of The Big Chicken)
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