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Dusk In A Dark Cloak

For My Star In the Afar

Dusk In A Dark Cloak
compels my gathering your words
reminding me of your absence
longing to hear your voice calling my name anew
stroking my psyche, causing my soul to spill
its ink to the ceremony of lighting candles
at dusk and dawn to you
praying I am visible...

Jealousy I wait for you
as you jealously guard me to you
under a canopy of stars I wait
tear stained face set to beam in radiance
at your voice, the shadow of your smile on my lips
an the color of your eyes twinkling me home to you...

bentfeather


963 posted on 07/29/2005 2:12:11 PM PDT by Soaring Feather
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To: bentfeather

*Very Good*


974 posted on 07/29/2005 2:33:44 PM PDT by international american (Tagline now flameproof....purchased from "Conspiracy Guy Custom Taglines"LLC)
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To: bentfeather

Beauteous Queenie!!


979 posted on 07/29/2005 2:37:07 PM PDT by StarCMC (Old Sarge is my hero...doing it right in Iraq! Vaya con Dios, Sarge.)
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To: bentfeather

VERY nice, bentfeather!


986 posted on 07/29/2005 2:43:58 PM PDT by EsmeraldaA (That witch does not kill me, makes me stronger (NIETZSCHE))
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To: bentfeather

Beautiful poem, bentfeather! I am in awe of your great talent! I am soooooo not poetic.


1,017 posted on 07/29/2005 3:52:11 PM PDT by luvie (God bless America and God bless and protect our troops!!)
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