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To: Kitty Mittens; Billie; Gabz; tuliptree76; Victoria Delsoul; JustAmy
Bob’s Bad Poem

Someone said my poems,
Were all so very good,
I couldn’t write a bad one so,
I guess I thought I should.

I’ll start by saying orange,
That doesn’t rhyme with squat.
So if you speak of oranges,
A poet you are not!

Another thing I hate to see,
Is words that don’t quite rhyme,
So if you happen on such things,
You’ll know they aren’t mine.

And meter is important too,
The rhythm of the pome,
I try to keep mine steady on,
And not wandering too very far from home.

The essence of a poem,
At least where I’m concerned.
Is that you have a point to make,
Not clever phrases turned.

Anyone can write a poem,
Free verse is free-for-all,
But it takes art to have them shown,
Somewhere other than a wall.

NicknamedBob . . . . July 14, 2005

437 posted on 07/14/2005 3:18:04 PM PDT by NicknamedBob (Mighty and enduring? They are but toys of the moment to be overturned by the flicking of a finger.)
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To: NicknamedBob; Billie; tuliptree76; Victoria Delsoul; DollyCali




Bob’s Bad Poem

Someone said my poems,
Were all so very good,
I couldn’t write a bad one so,
I guess I thought I should.

I’ll start by saying orange,
That doesn’t rhyme with squat.
So if you speak of oranges,
A poet you are not!

Another thing I hate to see,
Is words that don’t quite rhyme,
So if you happen on such things,
You’ll know they aren’t mine.

And meter is important too,
The rhythm of the pome,
I try to keep mine steady on,
And not wandering too very far from home.

The essence of a poem,
At least where I’m concerned.
Is that you have a point to make,
Not clever phrases turned.

Anyone can write a poem,
Free verse is free-for-all,
But it takes art to have them shown,
Somewhere other than a wall.

NicknamedBob . . . . July 14, 2005



440 posted on 07/14/2005 4:24:54 PM PDT by JustAmy (Remember our President and our troops in your prayers. God Bless America.)
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To: NicknamedBob

*applauds*


441 posted on 07/14/2005 4:50:37 PM PDT by tuliptree76 (I'm sailing on the wide accountancy.)
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To: NicknamedBob

Your bad poem is pretty good, lol.


444 posted on 07/14/2005 6:54:00 PM PDT by Victoria Delsoul
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To: NicknamedBob
Your Poem, "Bob's Bad Poem" is so Good, NicknamedBob! When I was Reading it, I was just Amazed at how you are able to Write these! Your Work is absolutely Fantastic!
453 posted on 07/15/2005 8:10:12 AM PDT by Kitty Mittens
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