What's wrong with these fools? Are you kidding? The question is: What's wrong with these bird-brains who pony up the dough for this "journalistic theater"??
...Hoyle says in the Noe Valley home he shares with his parents, comic actor Geoff Hoyle and San Francisco State lecturer Mary Winegarden.
Now this is good writing! B/c dollars-to-doughnuts says there's not a soul reading those above lines that doesn't see in his mind's eye both this "Noe Valley home", and "comic actor Geoff Hoyle and San Francisco State lecturer Mary Winegarden" look like.
LOL! I for one see a lot of house plants ...I mean a lot of house plants... in all kinds of containers; and a porch step that's been in need of repair for a long time...
I see at least one hanging bead doorway.