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To: concretebob
The FBI seems to like to target vulnerable innocents: [1]Richard Jewel, [2] the "person of interest" in the anthrax business, [3] Colleen Rowley the too-energetic agent--and whistleblower.

The comma makes the clause independent.

Three distinct vulnerable innocents targeted by the FBI.

Hatfill is the "person of interest".

124 posted on 01/30/2005 4:35:11 PM PST by PhilDragoo (Hitlery: das Butch von Buchenvald)
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To: PhilDragoo
You're right, my bad.
I tend to ignore commas in certain places within the sentence.
I have a boss who hates commas, and I've had to learn to write technical reports with out them.
Not being critical, but I would have re-structured the sentence, and placed "the person of interest" phrase at the end.
That's the kind of critiqueing I get every day.
A semi-colon would have served the same purpose.
125 posted on 01/30/2005 5:17:00 PM PST by concretebob (We will not stop until every a$$ is kicked and every name is taken.)
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