I hope this doesnt air. It really isnt very well produced. Good sentiment though.
Three things that need to change.
1. The music is too happy, it needs to be gloomier for its subject matter.
2. The announcer speaks to fast and has too much information in too little time. Stick to one or two subjects, Assasination plot and communism.
3. The article that reads Kerry quits over assination plot should be changed, its more helpful to Kerry with that headline. Quote from a newspaper how John Kerry's head of Veterans for Kerry, John Hurley pressured a man to lie about Kerry's involvement at the KC meeting.
I agree. I ofcourse didnt make the AD.
I agree with you, poorly done, won't get the message across.
This has been out there for along time. but to get it to the Sheep it Has to be done BETTER.
I have no speakers here (work) so can't here the music. Might I suggest the theme of JAWS.
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