Yeah, I like the story (and you put the "to be continued" in just the right spot. Here's an examble of Hap Kliban's more lengthy bits of cartoon dialogue:
Kliban was one twisted-up sumbitch, to be sure.
Expect more.
Less is more, of course.
Kliban was one twisted-up sumbitch, to be sure.
Oh, and I'm not. :^/