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To: snippy_about_it; bentfeather
I could spend a week trying to write to a poem half as good as yours.

the past and present
wishes for what might have been
dreams of what could be
49 posted on 09/30/2003 10:24:15 PM PDT by SAMWolf (Be alert. America needs more lerts.)
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To: SAMWolf; snippy_about_it; Darksheare; Darkchylde
What was it you said to me,
you did not understand love,
I don't either, I just like
the way I feel when
I am cared about, respected,
honored, cherished, and pampered.

I like those secret little smiles
those little glances out of the
corner of your eye
the little dimple in your chin
and that oh so coy silly grin
or the way you'll take my hand
to your face and just touch
my skin with a lite touch of
your warm lips...
No I really don't know love
at all, but I sure do love
the way your voice
sounds on the other end of the phone
and your special laugh when you're
embarrassed, oh yes, I love to be loved
by you....
But I really don't know love at all.

bentfeather
50 posted on 09/30/2003 10:36:28 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (~Poets' Know the Unknown~)
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To: SAMWolf
Now that's good haiku SAM.

Wise words put together perfectly. I think on your next camping trip you should take pen and paper. ;)
53 posted on 10/01/2003 3:04:27 AM PDT by snippy_about_it (Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
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