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To: bentfeather; snippy_about_it; SAMWolf; Darksheare
Well, are we all settled in?
Good, now I'll tell you the story of the mysterious
magical loofah! Okay, so I'm joking, there is no such
story... yet(?). As it is all snippy's fault (pointing
out before hand), I have a haiku... again. Two actually.

Looking in your eyes,
I get lost in the moment.
I must be dreaming.

Surrender to me,
be my love forever more.
We two shall be one.
36 posted on 09/30/2003 6:57:16 PM PDT by Darkchylde (Publishable Menacing Inc.)
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To: Darkchylde
Looking in your eyes,
I get lost in the moment.
I must be dreaming.

Surrender to me,
be my love forever more.
We two shall be one.


Love, just lovely, Chylde.
46 posted on 09/30/2003 10:07:31 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (~Poets' Know the Unknown~)
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To: Darkchylde
Those are good haiku.
48 posted on 09/30/2003 10:16:35 PM PDT by SAMWolf (Be alert. America needs more lerts.)
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