[Elisha]

Please read this, if you get a chance, and let me know what you think.

[Travis McGee]

Can you fit this chapter into the overall work? Is it the very beginning?

[MileHi]

Sheesh, that would make a great episode of "Night Gallery".

Thanks for the ping.

[Jeff Head]

Good stuff...maybe consider having the whole thing be a sort of alternate history of what life would be like in these United States had Al Gore won...or had Hillary run and won.

...proceed to have the bent one become the Secretary General of the UN and with his wife's help, impose the same on the whole world.

The "Sundown II" sequel for this work could be a description of several modern day people coming together afterward, living under the conditions described, and using the internet and other mediums to set up modern day committees of correspondence and safety, similar enough to what the founders did to leave no doubt as to where the story was going to lead.

Just some thoughts and ideas about a well written piece.

Here's my latest excerpt, posted on FR, from Volume IV of my Dragon's Fury Series of novels about a near term Third World War arising out of current events.

I'll BUMP you to that thread.

Thanbks SO much for sharing this with us.