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To: Rhyminsimon
But up here, It is free
Dashing from star to star

The answers matter not
There is not even one care
Up here, drifting in space,

And no cares
In the Dragon’s lair

I go not for analysis
of a poem
a poem thick with rich
and alive images
is all that is needed
what does it do for you
does it move your soul
does it color your night
from dark to bright
does it shine like
a sparkling sky
does it rhyme, no,
tell me why

When I dance a poets dance
filled with rich dreamy romance
traveling in outspace
in a fanthom world
yet alive and real
holding fantasy to surreal
in tight grip
always ready for a trip
to planets afar and away
stopping in the Milky Way
playing hide and seek
with a comets tail
oh it's grand....
leaving the land...


97 posted on 09/02/2003 8:24:29 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (Poetry lives in me and me through it.)
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To: bentfeather
Well, now that you put it like that...

Really beautiful stuff you have written. Your words have moved me in more than one way.

You have taken away my reason to rhyme.
I will have to get back to you in time.
98 posted on 09/02/2003 8:44:47 PM PDT by Rhyminsimon
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