To: bvw
Right. Four references to herself in one sentence. Yep, I'd say it's all about Brenda.
In place of all the "I"'s & "My"'s, (sounds like she's in this alone.) It should have been stated like this;
"We want to get the message out and the message is to keep looking for Danielle and thats the reason we are doing this."
To: the Deejay
Your restatement is too passive, too indefinite. Try again, imagining a dear little one is lost and you are desperate to get her back.
539 posted on
08/03/2002 8:03:25 PM PDT by
bvw
To: the Deejay
I think the quote in
this article is really strange. It almost sounds like she knows what happened and things got out of hand.
"My biggest hope is for someone to realize right now this has gotten big and they made a big mistake and let my daughter walk away," Brenda van Dam said Thursday on ABC's "Good Morning America."
541 posted on
08/03/2002 8:05:08 PM PDT by
Krodg
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