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To: Overtaxed
That's when you start throwing pens at them! :)

Is THAT what I did wrong?

I'm not really mad at them, just frustrated. I KNOW I can't write believable male characters, but I hate writing women, so I ended up with mostly guys (which, as I said and as they pointed out vehemently, I can't do well). But I refuse to start over (don't have time to, anyway!), so now I'm really upset with the story right now (which I already KNEW was crappy, but maybe not HOW crappy - I knew the plot was lame, but thought one or two of my characters were OK). And I don't want false postitive criticism, which is about the only kind of positive criticism I'm likely to get!

< / GROUSING SESSION >

40,334 posted on 11/10/2002 5:53:54 PM PST by RosieCotton
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To: RosieCotton
You did tell them that it's just a rough draft, didn't you? When you start doing revisions you can ask them how a guy would act/speak.

That's why I don't like showing people my rough drafts. They're so ......crappy.....and I like to spruce them up a bit first. :)
40,335 posted on 11/10/2002 6:04:29 PM PST by Overtaxed
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