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"To Secure These Rights" Prologue: The Last File (VANITY)
Free Republic ^ | 09.04.2026 | dware

Posted on 09/04/2026 11:03:53 AM PDT by dware

# PROLOGUE

## The Last File

Thomas Rourke had always liked November in West Virginia.

By then the hardwoods had given up most of their color, leaving the mountains stripped down to gray trunks, brown ridgelines and scattered stands of pine that seemed almost unnaturally green against everything around them. The first real snow was usually still a few weeks away, although there had been years when winter arrived early and buried the county before Thanksgiving. On most November nights, however, the temperature simply fell below freezing after dark, woodsmoke settled into the hollows, and the mountains grew quiet in a way that people who had spent their lives in cities rarely understood.

Rourke understood it.

He had spent more than three decades traveling through airports, federal buildings, motel rooms, courtrooms and cities where the sound of traffic never completely disappeared. When he retired from the Federal Bureau of Investigation, he had no interest in golf courses, gated retirement communities or Florida condominiums. He returned instead to the county where his mother had been born and bought an old two-story farmhouse on eleven wooded acres at the end of a narrow state road.

The house wasn't much to look at.

Its white siding had faded to something closer to gray, one porch post leaned slightly to the east, and every winter Rourke promised himself he would replace the aluminum gutters before spring storms tore them off altogether. The detached garage was newer than the house and probably worth more. Inside it sat his Ford pickup, a 1968 Mustang he had been restoring for twelve years, a gun safe too heavy for any sensible burglar to move, and enough tools to support the fiction that Thomas Rourke knew what he was doing whenever something broke.

His wife, Margaret, had loved the place immediately.

She had stood on the back porch the first afternoon they looked at it, staring toward a tree-covered ridge beyond the pasture, and told him she could grow old there.

She had been right.

She simply hadn't grown as old as either of them expected.

Cancer took her four years after Rourke retired.

The first winter afterward was the only time he seriously considered selling the house. Everything in it belonged to both of them, which meant everything reminded him that half of the partnership was gone. Her cast-iron skillets hung beside the stove. Her gardening gloves remained in a drawer in the mudroom. A blue ceramic coffee mug she'd bought in Charleston still sat in the cupboard even though a crack running through the handle made it useless.

Rourke couldn't throw it away.

Eventually he decided the memories were not the problem.

They were the reason to stay.

So he remained in the old farmhouse with Molly, a black Labrador that Margaret had insisted they adopt after seeing a photograph taped to the bulletin board at the veterinarian's office.

Molly was eleven now, gray around the muzzle and convinced that any human food consumed within thirty feet of her constituted a binding promise to share.

At 10:42 on a Thursday night, she was asleep in the hallway outside Rourke's office, occasionally twitching her paws as though pursuing something much faster in her dreams.

Rourke sat at the desk and stared at his computer screen.

His reading glasses had migrated halfway down his nose. A cup of coffee rested near his left hand, cold enough that he had stopped drinking it nearly an hour earlier. On the opposite side of the desk sat a framed photograph of Margaret at fifty-eight, laughing as she tried to keep the wind from blowing her hat into the New River Gorge.

He kept the photograph there because it reminded him that there had once been important things in his life that had nothing whatsoever to do with the federal government.

For most of his adult life, that had been easy to forget.

Rourke joined the FBI at twenty-seven.

He had not done it because he dreamed about carrying a badge.

As a boy, he'd wanted to fly airplanes. Later he'd considered becoming a lawyer until three years of undergraduate political science convinced him that he didn't particularly enjoy lawyers. The Bureau entered the picture almost accidentally after a professor suggested federal law enforcement to him, and Rourke discovered that the work appealed to several parts of his personality he had never known what to do with.

He liked puzzles.

He liked rules.

More than anything, he liked the idea that facts mattered.

Not opinions.

Not rumors.

Not what everybody in town knew to be true.

Evidence.

During his thirty-one years as a special agent, he had investigated bank fraud, kidnapping, organized crime, public corruption and domestic terrorism. He had spent months watching people who never knew his name and hours sitting across tables from men whose names later appeared in newspapers.

He had arrested innocent people.

Only two that he knew about.

The number still bothered him.

Both had been released quickly, and neither mistake had destroyed a life, but Rourke remembered their faces better than he remembered many of the guilty men he had sent to prison.

That was one of the lessons experience had given him:

Government mistakes were different from ordinary mistakes.

When Thomas Rourke was wrong about which wrench fit a bolt, he scraped his knuckles.

When Special Agent Thomas Rourke was wrong about a man, people with guns might enter that man's home.

That difference imposed an obligation.

For most of his career, Rourke believed the Bureau understood that obligation.

He still believed most agents did.

That distinction had become increasingly important to him.

He despised the fashionable habit of referring to entire institutions as though they possessed one mind and one morality. The FBI was not a person. Neither was the government. Both were composed of thousands of people ranging from extraordinary to incompetent, courageous to cowardly, honorable to corrupt, with most occupying the enormous ordinary territory between the extremes.

Rourke knew agents who had placed themselves between gunmen and children.

He knew agents who had lied.

He had testified against one.

There was a framed photograph on the wall behind him showing twenty-three members of his field office in 1996. Several had since died. One had taken his own life. Two had divorced after careers that demanded more from their families than their families could continue giving. One became an assistant director. Another left the Bureau in disgust and sold insurance.

They had never agreed on much.

But most had believed they were doing something honorable.

Rourke certainly had.

Which was why the document on his screen troubled him more than anything he had encountered since retirement.

At the top of the page appeared his name.

**ROURKE, THOMAS EDWARD**

He had stared at those letters long enough that they no longer looked like his name.

Below them appeared several identification numbers, administrative codes and database references that would have been meaningless to almost anyone outside federal law enforcement.

They were not meaningless to Rourke.

He understood enough of them to know that what he was reading was genuine.

The document was incomplete, apparently extracted from a larger analytical report, and he still did not know who had provided it. It had arrived electronically forty-eight hours earlier through an account known to only four people.

One of them was dead.

One was Rourke himself.

The other two had denied sending it.

That left several possibilities, none of which made him particularly comfortable.

The classification line appeared three rows below his name.

**ASSESSMENT CATEGORY: DOMESTIC RESILIENCY / ELEVATED**

Rourke leaned back and removed his glasses.

“Domestic resiliency,” he said aloud.

Molly lifted her head from the hallway.

Rourke glanced toward her.

“Apparently that's us now.”

The dog considered this, decided it contained no reference to dinner, and lowered her head again.

He smiled despite himself.

Margaret used to accuse him of carrying on more meaningful conversations with dogs than with people. He had always answered that dogs rarely interrupted.

The smile faded when he returned his attention to the screen.

He had seen threat assessments before.

Hundreds of them.

After September 11, he'd participated in enough interagency meetings to develop a permanent dislike of conference rooms, bad coffee and PowerPoint presentations containing arrows between boxes.

Those meetings had been necessary.

Rourke believed that then.

He believed it now.

The attacks had exposed catastrophic failures in the way American agencies collected and shared information. Pieces of the puzzle existed in different places, but institutional walls, legal restrictions, technological incompatibility and bureaucratic jealousy had prevented anyone from assembling them in time.

Rourke had been furious.

He remembered standing in a federal conference room less than a month after the attacks, slamming his palm against a table while arguing with representatives from two other agencies.

“If we know something that can stop the next one,” he had told them, “I don't give a damn whose database it came from. We share it.”

He had meant every word.

People were dead.

Thousands of them.

More might follow.

The country was frightened, and the people responsible for protecting it knew that another attack could come before they understood the first.

So they built systems.

They connected databases.

They created task forces.

They improved watch lists.

They expanded information sharing.

They developed relationships among federal, state and local agencies that would have been difficult to imagine a decade earlier.

Rourke had supported much of it.

He had helped with some of it.

That knowledge sat heavily in his stomach tonight.

He put his glasses back on and scrolled.

The system knew he owned firearms.

Hardly remarkable for a retired FBI agent living in West Virginia.

It knew he regularly visited a private shooting range.

It knew the addresses of the range and the approximate dates of his visits.

It knew he had attended a gun show outside Harrisburg.

It knew he had driven to the West Virginia State Archives, two county courthouses in Virginia, a constitutional-law symposium in Lexington and the county history museum fourteen times during the previous six months.

He clicked a location reference.

A map appeared.

Small dots stretched across several states, reconstructing his travels with an accuracy that would have impressed him if someone else had been the subject.

Automatic license-plate readers accounted for much of it.

Some probably came from commercial databases.

Other entries weren't immediately identifiable.

Rourke zoomed in.

There was the grocery store.

The county courthouse.

A restaurant where he met his daughter and two grandsons when they drove in from Virginia.

That one bothered him.

He stared at the dot.

For a moment the threat assessment disappeared and he remembered ten-year-old Joshua explaining, with great seriousness, why his grandfather needed a new video-game console despite owning no video games.

Margaret would have bought it before dessert arrived.

Rourke had compromised by giving the boy fifty dollars for his birthday and telling him capitalism required personal sacrifice.

His daughter had rolled her eyes.

He smiled again at the memory.

Then looked at the map.

The government knew he'd been there.

Why?

That was the question.

Rourke had no philosophical objection to police using license-plate readers to locate stolen cars, abducted children or wanted murderers.

If someone kidnapped Joshua tomorrow, Rourke would want every camera in America looking for the vehicle.

The problem was not that the information existed.

The problem was that somebody had used it to reconstruct the movements of Thomas Rourke.

And Thomas Rourke was not suspected of committing a crime.

At least none the document identified.

He returned to the assessment.

**ASSOCIATION INDICATORS**

The list contained twelve names.

Some he knew well.

Others barely at all.

A retired sheriff.

A former Marine who ran a gun store.

A constitutional-law professor.

Two officers from a regional firearms club.

A minister.

A state legislator.

A talk-radio producer.

Then:

**VANCE, MARA E.**

Rourke frowned.

He did not know Mara Vance.

He knew who she was.

She worked for a regional news publication and had written several stories Rourke considered better than average, which was approximately the highest compliment he offered journalists.

He had never met her.

He had never telephoned her.

He had never sent an email directly to her.

Three months earlier he had begun submitting material anonymously through the publication's online tip system, hoping somebody would notice the questions he was asking without attaching his name to them.

Apparently somebody had noticed.

Just not necessarily the reporter.

Rourke scrolled farther.

The section labeled **BEHAVIORAL INDICATORS** was worse.

Firearms ownership.

Frequent firearms training.

Contact with individuals associated with constitutionalist and antigovernment organizations.

Research into domestic federal tactical operations.

Searches concerning Ruby Ridge.

Waco.

Federal land disputes.

Continuity-of-government authority.

Emergency public-health powers.

Domestic deployment of military personnel.

Intelligence fusion centers.

Automatic license-plate-reader systems.

Contact with journalists.

Visits to sheriff's departments.

Public criticism of federal agencies.

Every fact was true.

That was what made the document frightening.

If it had contained lies, Rourke could have attacked the lies.

If an informant had invented statements, he could challenge the informant.

If an agent had falsified evidence, he knew exactly what to call it.

But nobody had fabricated anything.

The system had simply collected facts about Thomas Rourke and arranged them into a story Thomas Rourke did not recognize.

He reached the analytical summary.

The subject, it said, possessed an unusual combination of **institutional knowledge, firearms proficiency, law-enforcement relationships, ideological grievance indicators and network-building capability consistent with elevated facilitation potential during periods of domestic instability.**

Rourke read the sentence again.

Then once more.

The language was skillful.

He had written language like it.

It did not accuse him of planning a crime.

It did not say he intended violence.

It made no allegation requiring proof.

It described potential.

Potential could mean almost anything.

He took off his glasses and rubbed both eyes.

Thirty-one years in the Federal Bureau of Investigation had taught Thomas Rourke how to build a criminal case.

Start with conduct.

Establish facts.

Develop probable cause.

Present evidence to a judge.

Arrest the person suspected of committing the offense.

The process was imperfect because people were imperfect, but the structure mattered. Government was supposed to answer a basic question before taking away a citizen's liberty.

**What did he do?**

The document on Rourke's screen asked something different.

**What might he do?**

That distinction was small enough to disappear in bureaucratic language.

It was large enough to keep him awake at night.

Rourke rose from the desk and walked toward the kitchen.

Molly followed.

“You're not getting anything.”

Her tail began wagging anyway.

Rourke opened the refrigerator, removed the roast beef, and tore off a small piece.

“You understand this establishes no precedent.”

Molly took it gently.

“I'm serious.”

She stared at the refrigerator.

Rourke sighed and gave her another.

Margaret would have laughed.

The thought hit him harder than expected.

For several seconds he stood alone beneath the yellow kitchen light with one hand resting on the dog's head.

“Your mother would tell me I'm overreacting,” he said.

Molly looked up.

“No, that's not true. She'd tell me I was being an arrogant ass and then ask if I'd called somebody who actually knew what he was talking about.”

He closed the refrigerator.

“I miss her too.”

He returned to the office.

The desk contained months of research stacked into increasingly disorganized piles. Margaret had been the organized one. Rourke's filing system consisted primarily of remembering which pile he had placed something in and becoming irritated when anyone moved it.

None of the material was classified.

That mattered enormously to him.

He had taken an oath and signed agreements whose obligations did not disappear because he'd collected his pension.

What lay on his desk was more mundane than secrets.

Procurement contracts.

Federal grants.

Congressional testimony.

Police-department policies.

Data-retention agreements.

Privacy statements.

Court decisions.

Public-health emergency orders.

Inspector-general reports.

Training materials.

Vendor presentations.

Memoranda between agencies.

Newspaper clippings.

He had started with modern surveillance technology and somehow ended up reading about the Alien and Sedition Acts.

Elias Ward was responsible for that.

Ward ran the county museum, although “ran” suggested an institution with employees and funding rather than three rooms in an old municipal building where Elias fought constantly with a temperamental furnace and a county commission that regarded preservation as something best accomplished without spending money.

Rourke had known him for years.

They disagreed about almost everything.

Elias distrusted concentrated power instinctively.

Rourke distrusted people who distrusted things instinctively.

Their arguments had become one of the pleasures of retirement.

Years earlier they had nearly shouted at each other over Ruby Ridge.

Elias maintained that the federal government had turned a manageable firearms case into a catastrophe.

Rourke replied that Randy Weaver had associated with white separatists, violated federal firearms law and refused to appear in court.

Elias had asked a question Rourke remembered twenty years later.

“So which one of those things made his wife fair game?”

Rourke had been furious.

Not because he believed Vicki Weaver deserved to die.

Because he thought Elias had reduced a complicated operation to a cheap moral accusation.

Life had since taught Rourke that an argument could be unfairly phrased and still contain a question worth answering.

They'd revisited Ruby Ridge.

Then Waco.

The PATRIOT Act.

COINTELPRO.

Wartime internment.

Emergency powers.

Asset forfeiture.

Domestic intelligence.

COVID restrictions.

Border enforcement.

One night, sitting among boxes of old county records, Elias had observed that Americans had a peculiar habit of treating each expansion of government authority as though history began the morning it was proposed.

Rourke spent the next six months trying to prove him wrong.

Instead he had filled four inches of folders.

Nothing in those folders proved a conspiracy.

Rourke remained almost aggressively resistant to that word.

Conspiracies existed, certainly. He had investigated some.

But conspiracy theories provided psychological comfort because they implied somebody was in control.

A room somewhere.

A handful of villains.

A plan.

Find the villains and stop the plan.

The documents on Rourke's desk suggested something more difficult.

Nobody had built the entire system.

Congress authorized one part.

Presidents expanded another.

Agencies created programs.

Courts approved particular applications.

Technology companies developed capabilities.

Local departments accepted grants because the equipment helped solve crimes.

Banks complied with reporting requirements.

Citizens demanded protection after attacks.

Public-health officials demanded tools during emergencies.

Border communities demanded enforcement.

Police demanded intelligence.

Each brick had arrived with an explanation.

Most explanations were reasonable.

Rourke looked at his own name on the screen.

The wall existed anyway.

He opened a new document.

For several minutes he simply watched the cursor blink.

Then he typed:

**We built it for terrorists.**

He stopped.

That wasn't quite right.

He remembered September 2001.

The photographs.

The funerals.

The anger.

The promises that government would never again fail because one agency had information another could not see.

They had not been wrong to want something better.

Rourke refused to rewrite history merely because he disliked where history had gone.

He placed his fingers back on the keyboard.

**We built it for terrorists. Then we stopped requiring terrorists.**

He read the sentence.

That was closer.

He printed five copies.

The printer began chattering.

Molly appeared in the doorway, offended by the disturbance.

“Tell your mother to buy me a quieter printer.”

He stopped himself.

Old habits.

Four years and he still occasionally spoke as though Margaret were in another room.

Rourke looked toward her photograph.

“Yeah,” he murmured. “I know.”

He gathered the pages.

One went into the main folder.

Another into an envelope bearing Elias Ward's name.

A third he folded inside a reproduction of the Declaration of Independence Elias had given him during one of their arguments.

On the title page, Elias had written:

**Try reading the whole thing sometime.**

Rourke had replied beneath it:

**Try reading a federal statute sometime.**

He smiled at the exchange.

Then opened the Declaration.

His eyes found the familiar passage.

*That to secure these rights, Governments are instituted among Men, deriving their just powers from the consent of the governed...*

Rourke had read those words hundreds of times.

Tonight one word held him.

**Secure.**

Government existed to secure rights.

Not manufacture them.

Not ration them.

Not suspend them whenever protecting itself became difficult.

Secure.

He closed the booklet.

The external hard drive clicked.

Rourke returned to the computer and began examining the document more carefully.

Near the bottom was a reference he had previously overlooked.

**RELATED REGIONAL ACTIVITY**

He opened it.

Several states appeared.

Pennsylvania.

Virginia.

Kentucky.

Ohio.

Colorado.

The Colorado entry contained only fragments.

Western region.

Rural jurisdiction concerns.

Firearms density.

Infrastructure vulnerability.

Local law-enforcement resistance indicators.

One location appeared repeatedly.

**DELTA COUNTY**

Another reference mentioned Mesa County.

Rourke knew Colorado geography well enough to understand they were neighbors.

He picked up a yellow legal pad.

**DELTA COUNTY, COLORADO**

Below it he wrote:

**MESA CO. SHERIFF?**

He underlined both.

Then he heard tires on gravel.

The sound was faint enough that anyone unfamiliar with the property might have missed it beneath the wind.

Rourke did not.

Molly lifted her head.

The vehicle was moving slowly.

His driveway was nearly a quarter mile long.

People did not accidentally drive down it.

Rourke glanced at the digital clock beside the monitor.

11:46.

The vehicle stopped.

Molly stood.

Rourke remained seated for another moment, listening.

He had spent thirty-one years learning what fear sounded like.

The strange thing was that he did not feel afraid.

Not yet.

What he felt was irritation.

An old professional irritation at not having enough information.

A car door closed outside.

Then another.

Molly gave a low growl.

“Easy.”

Rourke reached across the desk and switched off the lamp.

Darkness filled the room except for the monitor.

He moved toward the window but did not open the curtain. He could see no headlights through the narrow gap at its edge.

His pulse had increased.

He noticed it clinically.

That habit never disappeared.

Neither did another one.

He opened the desk drawer.

His retired credentials rested inside beside a Colt .45 he had owned for more than twenty years.

Rourke looked at the pistol.

Then at the front of the house.

He picked it up, checked it automatically, and immediately felt foolish for doing so.

He wasn't expecting a gunfight.

He wasn't twenty-eight years old clearing a building.

This was his house in rural West Virginia.

He set the pistol on the desk rather than carry it.

That distinction mattered to him.

Someone knocked at the front door.

Three firm strikes.

Not pounding.

Not timid.

Molly barked.

“Stay.”

She didn't.

Rourke moved into the hallway with her beside him.

The knock came again.

“Mr. Rourke?”

Male voice.

Calm.

Professional.

Rourke stopped several yards from the door.

“Who is it?”

A short pause followed.

“Federal officers, sir. We'd like to speak with you.”

Rourke frowned.

Federal officers.

He had identified himself at thousands of doors.

Federal officers was not how he'd done it.

“What agency?”

Another pause.

“We'd prefer to discuss that with you directly, Mr. Rourke.”

Rourke looked back toward the office.

On the monitor twenty feet away, his own name still glowed in the darkness.

**DOMESTIC RESILIENCY / ELEVATED**

His mouth had gone dry.

He thought about telephoning the sheriff.

Then thought better of it.

Not because he feared the sheriff.

Because Rourke still did not know what this was.

There might be an entirely legitimate explanation.

Perhaps former colleagues needed to speak privately.

Perhaps someone believed he possessed information connected to an investigation.

Perhaps—

Another knock interrupted him.

“Mr. Rourke?”

Rourke walked closer but did not unlock the door.

“Do you have a warrant?”

This time the silence outside lasted noticeably longer.

“We're not here to arrest you, sir.”

Something inside Rourke shifted.

Not fear.

Recognition.

He had sat across from enough interview subjects to understand careful language.

They had not answered his question.

He placed his hand against the door.

“Am I free to decline?”

No response came immediately.

The November wind moved through the trees outside and pushed softly against the old house.

Molly stood beside him, staring at the door.

Rourke thought of Margaret on the back porch twenty years earlier, telling him she could grow old here.

He thought about his daughter.

His grandsons.

Elias sitting amid his dusty museum boxes telling him that history was filled with people who assumed somebody else would draw the line.

He thought about the agents in the photograph upstairs.

Good people.

People he still loved.

People who had believed, as he had, that power could be trusted when good men exercised it for good reasons.

Then Rourke thought about the map on his computer screen.

The restaurant.

The gun range.

The museum.

The courthouse.

His life reduced to dots.

The voice outside finally answered.

“Mr. Rourke, we'd like you to come with us so we can clear up a few questions.”

Rourke almost laughed.

Thirty-one years in federal law enforcement had taught him that **clear up a few questions** could mean anything from fifteen minutes to fifteen years.

“Am I required to come with you?”

Another silence.

That was the answer.

Rourke turned away from the door.

“Give me a minute.”

He returned to the office.

The assessment still filled the screen.

For the first time since receiving it, he stopped thinking about whether the system was constitutional, necessary, temporary, defensible or misunderstood.

Instead he wondered something much simpler.

**What did it intend to do with him?**

He deleted the downloaded file from the desktop and emptied the recycle bin, knowing full well that anyone sophisticated enough to care could probably recover it.

He placed the envelope marked **E. WARD** beneath several old magazines.

Then he picked up the Declaration booklet containing the printed page.

He considered hiding it somewhere more elaborate.

Instead he carried it into the living room and placed it among a dozen other old books on a shelf.

Sometimes the best hiding place was the place no one thought worth searching.

Rourke returned to the hallway.

The pistol remained upstairs.

He had deliberately left it there.

He did not want anyone standing on his porch later claiming that Thomas Rourke had approached armed federal officers with a weapon.

That possibility angered him because he knew exactly how easily a technically accurate sentence could become a completely misleading story.

**ARMED FORMER FBI AGENT CONFRONTS FEDERAL OFFICERS AT WEST VIRGINIA HOME.**

He could already see the headline.

He reached the door.

Before touching the deadbolt, he looked once more around the house.

Margaret's coat still hung on a hook in the mudroom because he had never found the courage to donate it.

Her photograph sat upstairs.

Molly's food bowl rested beside the kitchen cabinet.

A stack of mail waited on the side table.

His reading glasses were still on his face.

Nothing about the house looked historic.

Nothing about the moment felt historic.

That was another thing Elias had taught him.

People living through history almost never knew what later generations would call it.

To them it was simply Thursday night.

Rourke bent and rubbed Molly behind the ears.

“You stay here.”

She wagged her tail.

He swallowed.

“That's an order, Special Agent.”

She licked his wrist.

Rourke stood.

Then he unlocked the deadbolt.

Before opening the door, he looked through the narrow window beside it.

Two men stood on the porch.

Dark jackets.

No visible tactical gear.

A government sedan sat in the driveway.

They looked utterly ordinary.

That unsettled him more than armored men would have.

Thomas Rourke opened the door.

Cold November air entered the house, carrying the smell of woodsmoke and damp leaves.

One of the men gave him a practiced, almost apologetic smile.

“Mr. Rourke?”

Rourke looked past them toward the mountains.

For thirty-one years he had believed that when federal officers appeared at a man's door, there needed to be a reason.

Tonight he was the man behind the door.

And for the first time in his life, Thomas Rourke was no longer certain the reason needed to be a crime.

He stepped onto the porch.

Behind him, Molly began to whine.

The door closed.

The wind moved through the bare West Virginia trees, and the old farmhouse settled back into silence.


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1 posted on 09/04/2026 11:03:53 AM PDT by dware
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To: dware

That is the longest piece pf writing I have read for a long while. And usually it has been non fiction that I read.That is a complement, it kept my interest.


2 posted on 09/04/2026 12:47:57 PM PDT by jimfr
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To: dware

good read. i hope you publish it.


3 posted on 09/04/2026 12:58:11 PM PDT by dadfly
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To: jimfr; dadfly

I’ll post Chapter 1 The Missing Man tomorrow! I’m working through some editing on additional chapters and plan to post one chapter per day til I’m finished.


4 posted on 09/04/2026 1:31:58 PM PDT by dware (Americans prefer peaceful slavery over dangerous freedom)
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