Laz,
I like both the short stories, I thought maybe you could mix them together with the TV aspect of the second one as an afterward to the first one. Kind of like “well I’m done arguing with you, what do you want to do watch TV?”
If I had to choose one of the other I think I’d go with number one. It sounded more cerebral. Just one man’s opinion. Jim
One vote for Story One! piytar voted for Story One earlier, that’s two for Story One.
Me too.
I like the two combined.