[Deaf Smith]

I had just finished reading your thread when you pinged:

1). How do Sprites hear to catch their prey, when the story indicates that there was no atmosphere?

2) Noted that it will be much later before the main character of the story is revealed. The “corporation” looking for rare earth minerals is the evil one in your story.

Why? The corp hired a stupid buffoon from Buffalo NY that cannot focus on his job, daydreams, is hard on electrical equipment and cannot comprehend that a 8 meter worm with teeth is kinda detrimental to one’s health.

3). How deep into the story before more is revealed about the evil corporation?

[Lazamataz]

1. Sound travels well in water.

2 and 3. The ‘evil corporation’ is completely incidental to the story.

To be fair, a reader will be best suited to reading the first novel, though I intend this sequel to stand on its own.

Thanks for your thoughts!