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This is possibly going to be the first chapter of my sequel novel. Feedback and reviews welcome!

2 posted on 07/12/2025 1:36:26 AM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: Lazamataz

Nice work! Is the Writer’s Guild new? First time I’ve seen it. Thx.


12 posted on 07/12/2025 3:45:18 AM PDT by Lee'sGhost ("Just look at the flowers, Lizzie. Just look at the flowers.")
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To: Lazamataz

Congratulations, Laz. Sounds terrific! Please include me on the ping list.


14 posted on 07/12/2025 4:00:31 AM PDT by Don@VB (THE NEW GREEN DEAL IS JUST THE OLD RED DEAL)
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To: Lazamataz

nice, but if sprites were a known entity, would martini have more of a defense protocol?

i do like the descriptive nature of your work. to the point.

t


20 posted on 07/12/2025 4:31:48 AM PDT by teeman8r (Armageddon won't be pretty, but it's not like it's the end of the world or something )
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To: Lazamataz

…before his helmet cracked open. FABULOUS wordsmithing.


48 posted on 07/12/2025 6:16:05 AM PDT by BHI2025
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To: Lazamataz

That is a good start Laz! I can’t wait to see it in Barnes and Noble. Now about those “Sprites”. Were they Great White Sprites, Black Tipped Sprites or just run if the mill Hammerhead Sprites? LOL


90 posted on 07/12/2025 9:32:16 AM PDT by oldeguy (you can take my firearms when you find the creek I lost them in.)
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