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VANITY: Request for Freepers to Review Article
Self | N/A | Farsider

Posted on 06/03/2025 6:56:45 AM PDT by far sider

I wrote an article that I want to submit to a publisher. The subject is politics and history.

I would appreciate it if some fellow freepers would review it and give me their frank opinions.

Let me know and I will forward it to you.


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To: Lazamataz

Hi, Laz:

I’m new here. Today as a matter of fact.

I’m a gov. speechwriter, and a published author. I have another book coming out this summer.

Sign me up for your guild.

We should talk. I’m no Stephen King in terms of success, but I’ve been in the business since 1995.


21 posted on 06/04/2025 1:45:39 PM PDT by BHI2025
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To: BHI2025; piytar

You will be added to the Writers Guild of Free Republic. As far as talking, we should. I’m 85% finished with my first novel, not counting a few re-reads and corrections. It’s getting close to finished, and while I have a professional who will get me out there - piytar - it can never hurt to have another contact.


22 posted on 06/04/2025 2:28:12 PM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: Lazamataz

What is Piytar?


23 posted on 06/04/2025 3:19:33 PM PDT by BHI2025
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To: BHI2025; piytar
What is Piytar?

piytar is a freeper friend.

Or a communicable disease. I haven't decided which.

KIDDING, PIYTAR! put down the knife. 😂

24 posted on 06/04/2025 3:27:34 PM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: Lazamataz

Dangit. I just got done sharpening my favorite one again. Now you tell me to put it down?! Sigh


25 posted on 06/04/2025 5:46:58 PM PDT by piytar (Remember Ashli Babbitt, Rosanne Boyland, and Corey Comperatore!)
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To: Lazamataz

Have you started querying agents yet?


26 posted on 06/05/2025 8:17:26 AM PDT by BHI2025
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To: BHI2025; piytar
Have you started querying agents yet?

No sir. I'm still researching what a Book Proposal looks like.

Besides, the product is still not mature, though I am 86% complete now.

27 posted on 06/05/2025 8:26:30 AM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: BHI2025; Lazamataz

That’s one of my rolls in this project. Feelers out there. Just initial ground work.


28 posted on 06/05/2025 9:26:42 AM PDT by piytar (Remember Ashli Babbitt, Rosanne Boyland, and Corey Comperatore!)
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To: far sider

Frank left town.


29 posted on 06/05/2025 9:33:20 AM PDT by Bullish (I've never seen such morons... Have you?)
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To: Lazamataz

I sent you a message hours and hours ago.
Good news! You don’t have to do a proposal! They are a huge pain, but they are only for nonfiction.
Thank me later! Ha!


30 posted on 06/05/2025 2:28:01 PM PDT by BHI2025
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To: piytar

You want to send me your piece?


31 posted on 06/05/2025 3:35:54 PM PDT by BHI2025
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To: BHI2025
I sent you a message hours and hours ago.

I received no Free Republic mail, or an email to any of my addresses.

Good news! You don't have to do a proposal! They are a huge pain, but they are only for nonfiction.

I did not know that, I am a novice in this trade. Thank you!

32 posted on 06/05/2025 4:23:59 PM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: BHI2025; piytar
You want to send me your piece?

You should ask me. I am the actual pen-to-paper author, and piytar is the originator of the overall idea and arc of the novel, a person I bounced ideas off of (and thus we mutually refined those ideas), and is the promoter of the work.

33 posted on 06/05/2025 4:26:42 PM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: Lazamataz; piytar

My bad. I thought piytar was the one who had written the article. You have the novel.


34 posted on 06/07/2025 5:36:49 AM PDT by BHI2025
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To: Lazamataz

Laz:

I just dug up my fiction publishing stuff. It’s a gold mine! Drop me a line at raliagfm@gmail.com

Rick


35 posted on 06/09/2025 1:53:15 PM PDT by BHI2025
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To: Lazamataz

Talked to an old agent of mine today…

Your book is sci fi, yes?

If so, let me know.

He had some good news for you.


36 posted on 06/11/2025 2:33:58 PM PDT by BHI2025
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To: BHI2025

Sweet! Will contact you immediately by email....


37 posted on 06/11/2025 3:42:14 PM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: BHI2025

I’m 96% finished. I sent a copy of the draft as-is. If you like it — and I’m sure you will — send it off to your guy, (once I give a go-ahead).


38 posted on 06/11/2025 3:50:53 PM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: BHI2025
Your book is sci fi, yes?

It's a combination of science fiction and political thriller. I take the Larry Niven approach... at least the approach he took in his short stories: I take society as it is, throw some technology at it, and see what happens.

It's also got a spiritual side to it.

39 posted on 06/11/2025 4:01:42 PM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: Lazamataz

You see the email I sent you?


40 posted on 06/12/2025 1:54:26 PM PDT by BHI2025
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