The writing style seems ok, if a bit choppy—too many short verb-free sentences. Can’t tell much in such a short snippet.
But the content kind of grabbed me. You’ve gotten me curious already about this guy. The dog—not so much.
The dog, Tammy, came along on the journey too. She's as much a part of the overall story as anything. I would be remiss if I didn't include her from the beginning :-)
Several months earlier it was like God was speaking straight to my heart: :"What are you doing? You know your father isn't coming back. You know this isn't the place you want to live the rest of your life. So pack up the bare essentials and your dog and GO. Just GO. Don't plan on where you are headed. Let Me guide you."
We spent a year traveling across America, looking for a new place to call home.