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Posted on 11/17/2024 4:50:52 AM PST by Lazamataz
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AI is only as good as the human behind it. I can always tell when someone is written by AI—it sounds wooden and dead. Write your own book.
Oh, I am definitely NOT using AI for the actual writing. Like you, I find AI is simply uncreative, flat, and forced. I originally had some fear of AI. No more.
I am, however, using it for suggestions on how to improve my writing. It seems to work fairly well in that regard.
i have the sane problem. that class i took in journalism ruined my descriptive style...
Please add me to this ping list. When my sweetie passed away a few years ago he left behind a couple of unfinished novels. One is sci-fi. The other was a semi-autobiographical account of his life in submarines. I’ve thought about trying to finish one myself, or offer them to someone who’d like to try their hand at writing.
Brevity is the soul of wit. ;-)
Cheers! ‘Pod
Indeed, but brevity is not the soul of sales on Amazon. 😉
It’s good not to be wordy. Wordy is boring.
As far as length, your work is going to be as long or short as it needs to be.
Fulfill your vision.
You will come to fear AI (fraud) again. The next time you use it, it will accuse you of plagiarizing! Then it will ask you if you know what FAFO truly means.;)
Congratulations. Most don’t even start to write.
Subplots...yes...agree.
Question: How about more plots? Like a mystery, how and why did you start the story where and when you did? How did that occur? Perhaps reveal and tease that as you progress.
Assuming you’re familiar with the hero’s journey and you’ve outlined that. If you want, do the same with your antagonist (s).
With regard to characters, false friends and benevolent antagonists as minor characters can give you things that will add to the twists and of course add words.
Keep going!
Ok. Here goes:
A NOVEL, by Laz
Stuff happened.
The end.
It happened.
D’oh! Beat me by two seconds!
The writers did all of that in the show “24”.
I know why, because you can only really do about 5 minutes of cool stuff in an hour.
But I would have been good with the show if it had only lasted 5 min every week as long as I didn’t have to ever see or hear about Jack’s daughter.
Write it your way and eff those who tell you it needs to be different/longer/elaborate.
Elaborate writing is for sissies.;-)
And, as an aside, now that you've got me stirred up, minimalist writing can be VERY complex. It takes more work by the writer (and the reader), and it is certainly more interesting...and even more powerful in my opinion.
When I submitted my first book for publication, the ‘editors’ came back quickly with suggestions taken directly from a collegiate style guide.
I fought them on a good bit of that. Their ‘style guide’ pretty much eliminated my own style.
I won.
This second one is going much better.
It was a dark and stormy night. A door slammed. A woman screamed.
I’ve written several novels, some of which are on Amazon. The way I addressed all of those things in your excellent list was to create a biography for each character. What experiences shaped their childhood? Were they abused or spoiled? I went into great detail for even minor characters. Then when those characters appeared they didn’t mindlessly advance the plot. Most of these things were never mentioned in story. The characters responded to circumstances, sometimes in surprising and, even to me, unexpected ways. When the characters and their interactions are driving the plot, you’ll find it resembles the way things work in the real world.
If you do this. The subplots write themselves.
I was repeatedly asked by readers, was this or that character actually someone I knew?
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