Many thanks.
Ok, so I read chapter 9, which was delivered to my email (after I subscribed).
Well, to be more accurate, I didn’t read it, I skimmed it.
My impression is that you are a far better writer than I.
It’s clear to me that I must put in a lot more work in, to rewrite what is rather dry, and make it more immersive. You seem to manage that very well. Me, not so much.
I’ll permit your style to seriously alter my own.
I’m going to share my cell number via Freepmail. Please call at your earliest convenience. Text first, I don’t answer unknown numbers... though I might if I’m expecting your call.