[SeekAndFind]

Almost immediately in her preamble, for example, we find a dangling modifier, the sort of thing that we used to have drilled out of us in grade 5: “As a future Black alumnus, this study is interesting…” A study is not an alumnus. Two words sometimes meld together as one, e.g. “underwhich,” reminiscent of my own students’ predilection for “alot.” Travis Kavulla at National Review flags “Predominately” for “Predominantly,” “their” for “there,” and blacks compared to “other” Third World Students. He might have added “accomlishes” and “effected” for “affected.” We note, too, there are very few references — a damning omission — as well as a citation with no source.

[Skwor]

Elite has been nothing more than a conferred title of nobility for scores of years. It stopped being an an earned achievement in nearly 60 years imho.

[cuz1961]

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[Bon of Babble]

Michelle Obama certainly got a pass on her thesis - in a way a Republican first lady wouldn’t have been.

It was so bad it was laughable.

Criticizing it is deemed racist, so it is left alone -while she is hailed, feted and honored as a “Princeton Graduate.”

[GMThrust]

I regret not having paid more attention to sentence structure in school. That subject was taught in elementary school and faded out during high school. Knowing sentence structure is coming in handy when looking at the original Greek texts of the Bible. Proper understanding changes the textual interpretation dramatically.

[Jotmo]

Just more evidence to justify why everyone should question the qualifications or skills of any minority on the “approved” list.

It’s easier to just pass them on than to face accusations of racism.

This of course hurts the minorities who actually have the qualifications and skill the most, as everyone will assume they are just an Affirmative Action hire form the get go.

Those people aught to be livid over this kind of crap, and speak out loudly. I wonder why they don’t.

[simpson96]

Big Mike’s thesis is an embarrassment even at the community college level.

[The Great RJ]

It would seem that both Michelle O and Kamala both mastered liberal newspeak and dish up word salads. “Dr” Jill Biden, however, wrote her thesis in the educational glossolalia that permeates schools of education.