The problem is not necessarily with your narrative (which is certainly possible) but what you did not talk about....
Security.
This article should help explain why they did not want to talk about the lapses in security:
https://www.zerohedge.com/markets/watch-paul-pelosi-hammer-attack-bodycam-video-released
Some security folks did not do their job—that is why Paul mentioned the Capitol Police in his 911 call—where were they?
There is no way anyone should be able to smash glass at the Speaker’s home without a mob of security attacking them—long before any entry was possible.
The Capital police were asleep at the wheel.
Yep. I read somewhere they had turned off the security system because it falsed too much.
This would be the second time, that we know of, that Nannie P deliberately downgraded security.