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To: MachIV; Pontiac

This is Newsweak. Wow. Their editing is no better than what you might find in a teen magazine, if that.

I would have worded it: “Montana Grizzly Bears killed due to strange behavior caused by highly pathogenic virus.”

Granted, it is three extra words, and I know brevity is a quality stressed by Strunk and White in their “Elements of Style” guide, but...that strikes me as being penny-wise and pound-foolish.


12 posted on 01/19/2023 4:34:08 AM PST by rlmorel ("If you think tough men are dangerous, just wait until you see what weak men are capable of." JBP)
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To: rlmorel

That is much better.

I figured out what the original title meant, but it took several rereads.


32 posted on 01/19/2023 6:28:48 PM PST by gitmo (If your theology doesn't become your biography, what good is it?)
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