To: Lazamataz
Copyedited your copyedit. Removed awkward phrasing and poor word choice. All very good choices!
I chose to correct only the most-egregious errors about which there could be no argument. I tend to be more minimalistic.
Regards,
16 posted on
01/17/2022 7:02:14 AM PST by
alexander_busek
(Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence.)
To: alexander_busek
To that end, then, you did well. :)
17 posted on
01/17/2022 7:04:03 AM PST by
Lazamataz
(I feel like it is 1937 Germany, and my last name is Feinberg.)
To: alexander_busek
“horror of horrors” should never appear in any written form.
19 posted on
01/17/2022 7:04:50 AM PST by
Lazamataz
(I feel like it is 1937 Germany, and my last name is Feinberg.)
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