That could be. It's funny... I always pay attention to what language I use when I write down a dream or tell it to someone else. Here where I said "he was more interested in the tiny vegetables that were much younger," I laughed when reading it back, because that's kinda the description of my ex. Although I should have said, "he was more interested in the tiny vegetables that were much younger and preferably already married."
But I like your translation better.