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My analysis:

This poem is poorly written, poorly punctuated, and poorly focused. The author needs to go back and reconsider their phrasing and flow of the poem. I really don’t consider it a poem in any classical or abstract sense either.

1/10 will not read again.

Timmy, age 8

[Savage Beast]

How long will the American People tolerate the lowering of standards everywhere in America? Such vulgarity imposed on children? Violence in the streets? A press that cannot be trusted? A military whose mission is social engineering, not national defence? Corruption at all levels of government? Corruption of the voting process?

How much more will the American People tolerate?

How low must standards descend?

[redangus]

An infantile rant. Not a poem.