Could be an improvement but the original had great colors.
When I was young, I used to insult my uncle’s painting collection. By a bunch of guys I had never heard of or hardly knew about - Picasso, Leger, Cliff Styl, Rotko, Arp, Miro, Kandinsky, Jackson Pollock (either #1948 or #1949), etc. Did love his small “Klee” paintings. Really good art.
One painting had a rough pebble like texture of a figure that looked like a skull (with eyes), crossbone arms, and bone legs or chest. I asked my uncle, a doctor, whether that was a painting of one of his patients who didn’t make it. He was NOT amused (actually he had a great sense of humor including putting Rembrandt print in his bathroom).
PS: Pollock and his wife were friends of my uncle as were some of the other artists.
Finally my uncle gave me an educational tour of his works and I learned a lot about them, esp. Picasso’s early works 1910-1915 period - really good paintings once you understood what they were portraying.
There were at least three that were painted in Army olive/brown camouflage color and had parts of broken clocks and toys pasted to the canvas. They really did suck!
A few good ones were sold by Sotheby’s decades later. Don’t ask!
Additional information on paintings I referred above #67.
Clyfford Still - corrected spelling, “Painting 1949”
Jean Dubuffet, skeleton figure “Monsieur Plume - Portrait de Henri Michaux”, 1947.
Olive-drab paintings/crap by Jasper Johns, Rauschenberg, etc
Jackson Pollack is “No. 19, 1949”