The world burns, but commas.
*rolls eyes*
I added the blog pimp key word for you you forgot to add
You’re welcome.
I like the attempt at lively prose. It’s not bad. Better than a lot I’m seeing posted here.
But you still have some problems. Eg
“Days later, the vessel is still stuck, amid a frantic effort to free it, and fears over the cascading costs of the fallout.”
Watch your commas or your verbs or lack thereof.
If you are going to write a sentence with an aside you should check how the sentence reads without it. So, take out “amid a frantic effort to free it”.
“Days later, the vessel is still stuck and fears over the cascading costs of the fallout.”
You see you have a missing verb.
It could be fixed by correcting your comma usage:
“Days later the vessel is still stuck amid a frantic effort to free it and fears over the cascading costs of the fallout.”
But then how does the fallout cost money? I think you mean the cost of rescue, of getting it unstuck and the money list waiting. The fallout will come later and be due to these costs of rescue and business losses.
Where do you get your Weibo crap from?
The world burns, but commas.
*rolls eyes*