I blew you off with a cynical answer, which wasn't helpful. This is a more appropriate reply.
Yes, I believe I am qualified. I have an engineering degree from a top rated accredited university. I retired from a major corporation as the director of a technology center there. As such, part of my job was to approve and therefore edit technical papers and test reports. I approved many hundreds of them. Some of these became the basis for a UN International Standard. I have testified as an Expert Witness in a large patent lawsuit.
One of the first things I look for in any equality is "Are the units consistent?" Are the units on the left side of an equal sign the same as the units on the right side? In Engineering Mechanics, there are just two basic units of measurement, the cgs (centimeter-gram-seconds) system and the fps (foot pound-seconds) system, the Metric and the English systems. Almost all basic measurements can be defined in these systems, and units have to be consistent in all equations.
The first two items I mentioned, time is not the inverse of amplitude, and Power has different units than intensity, thus, they failed this requirement.
The next, pair production avalanche, is simply a group of meaningless buzzwords. They are undefined in the document, and their context is undefined. That's always a no-no in a valid technical paper.
The last, polarization of the local vacuum state, illustrates meaningless obfuscation. A vacuum is the absence of anything, it can't be polarized. Combining the words, local, vacuum, and state is just unnecessary fluff, to sound technical.
These four were just examples I found quickly, and I didn't want to waste any more time. The patent was full of such drivel.
According to the War Zone, this release was just a small part of the documents they received.
So if you are so knowledgeable (which I do not dispute), how come the Navy does not seem to have people with your credentials or better to say the guy is full of it, but instead presses ahead?
Either you are wrong because there are missing documents or their is some other effect which is not explained, or else you must immediately contact the Navy and tell them to stop wasting our money or just sell the works to China as a good will gesture. China Job Killer Joe will want his cut, you know. Hunter may need part of the action also.