[dinodino]

Poor writing, but can’t hurt to send it, I suppose...

[Swiffer_Ralf]

I applaud the effort and sentiment of the OP.

It could have been written in bloody crayon, chalk or by lump of coal and it is still a heartfelt presentation and rally cry.

Maybe it does not measure up to the Grammarly efforts of some here, though
I can await any detractors version.

I hope upon reflection by those who critique others efforts can do so with kind assistance or suggestions rather than provoke disdain from those who respect the OP effort.

Regards

[Rainier Mat Potac]

The only man who makes no mistakes is the man who never does anything.

Theodore Roosevelt

Of course, it's far from perfect and I expected at least some disapproval. I lead a busy life. However, every single patriotic effort counts in my book. The intent was to spark action, generate conversation and hopefully learn from my fellow patriots.

I'm afraid we've become far too critical in this digital age and far too complacent in the good fight. Meanwhile, we've allowed the left to infiltrate our culture, schools, universities, media and Hollywood.