[lee martell]

Was this written by a computer? I noticed the last complete sentence started off with a non specific, second person reference:

“He said that when the victim was loaded into an ambulance, he still acted as if the fight was continuing.”

Maybe the Editor was baking some ‘Special Brownies’ for himself.

[alexander_busek]

Was this written by a computer? I noticed the last complete sentence started off with a non specific, second person reference: “He said that when the victim was loaded into an ambulance, he still acted as if the fight was continuing.”

The full quote from the article exerpt posted here:

District Police Chief Paul Cordova said the fight erupted after school Wednesday outside a convenience store across from the Jane Long Academy in southwest Houston. He said that when the victim was loaded into an ambulance, he still acted as if the fight were continuing.

Looks okay to me!

Regards,

[Steven Scharf]

Bgill excerpted the first part of the paragraph out which referred to the person being quoted.