Sorry my line breaks didn’t seem to post correctly, but you can tell where they are.
Yeah, you did a good job but it was a bit lot lost in the presentation.
I don’t use html, or rather, html for by posts are being taken care of by Free Republic. To do a line break I just have to hit return on my keyboard.
I know in order to get more fancy I could use html to get font changes but it’s not worth the hassle to me.
Anyway, nice job. I could hear the music while I was reading your lyrics.