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You overuse the word "meltdown". Without looking, I believe that's about the fifth time now. As you know, if you are truly a Fantasywriter, that's just bad writing. And you keep repeating the same theme over and over. This is common with you and makes you boring.

This "ad hominem" thing is just victim whining couched in pseudo-intellectual language. It doesn't make you sound smart. It just ups the level of the whine. Stop it. Fight back. You are completely vanilla and super boring.

Now, don't take all that personally. Take it as an honest critique of your writing style and overall gung fu. Your style is weak and ineffectual.

I'm gonna go out on a limb here. I'm betting that if you are in fact some type of writer, that you have had little to no success. You can't have with such a repetitive and unoriginal writing style. And the way your mind works is very uninspiring and one dimensional.

Am I right? If so, please take my well intended notes in the spirit in which they are offered and become the man that you always wanted to be.

And stop lying. That helps too. People can sense an honest man and they will listen to him and be interested in what he has to say.

p.s. About that ping list? Think of what you could learn and how you could use it to improve yourself.

Bagster

I'm betting that if you are in fact some type of writer

Maybe he is - not saying this is the right one, but the same screen name.

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