>>Does anyone elses eyes ‘ache’ after reading that garbled bunch of trash?
Yes. I had to post as soon as I read that the house was “exploded”. I’m pretty sure the correct colloquial English is simply “blown up”. I’ll try to read past the first sentence again, but I don’t think I’ll make it to the end of the story.
His use of ‘exploded the house’ was the first thing I noticed too. And he does it several times! Funny thing though, in paragraph six he actually uses the ‘blew up’ term...