The weakness of that book is teenaged girls who are like video game heroines, capable of amazing physical and tactical feats, beautiful and brilliant, everything a feminist consider ideal except with conservative values and a strong father.
I can’t suspend disbelief that long, and I write scifi and horror.
Heh. Yeah. He did Marry Sue it up, didn’t he?
But, in his defense, he was writing the stories for his daughters at the time.
Gimme some titles of your writing. I’ll check it out. If you don’t want to do it public here, PM me please?
I’m always on the prowl for new stuff to read.