50 errors in a small paragraph? That is exceptional. That is genius. Any possibility you could recall that paragraph and print it here for everyone to see?
(I would love to have it as an example for an article later on.)
It really wouldn't be anything new or unusual...if you had ever had to correct papers at either a high school or college level.
It's abysmally sad and there's no reason in the world for anyone to see/read his humiliating show of ignorance.
I DID tell him that this farce WOULD be accepted and he WOULD get his M.A. but someday he would have to deal with that.
He WOULD get a job/position that he DIDN'T deserve but got because of his race. But, someday he would HAVE to write something...SOMETHING and ALL his literary shortcomings would be on display and he would be humiliated.
You CAN go to ANY high school or community college English instructor for examples of poor literary skills. ASK THEM and you would have PLENTY of fodder for your article.
Trust me, you CAN.
P.S. I do have a fairly good memory but recalling such garbage is not likely. SOME things I try very hard to FORGET.